【翻译】薄樱鬼手机英文版特别故事Tea Ceremony Event

Hello米娜桑,虽然已经在吧里混了那么久,但还是第一次发帖,请多多指教喔!
(=゚ω゚)ノ
本帖一切图片均为自己截的游戏官图。
一楼宣传海报及游戏界面喂食度娘~ (我丢!)
(╯°□°)╯(


楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-14 17:55:00 +0800 CST  
嗯你没有看错,薄樱鬼确实有手机英文版!(好像很多人还不知道……)
去年在亚洲动漫节AFA接到这张海报时还是有那么点激动啊,于是刚上线的时候便下载了。结果由于游戏配备尚未齐全,一开始只能看到第二章节… 好不容易等到二月底完整版开卖了,价格却是巨贵… 不过因为没有PSP,为了最爱的薄樱鬼,对爸妈好说歹说还是买到手啦!\(//∇//)/ 耶~

App完整版包含:
1.《薄樱鬼—新选组奇谭》(也就是本篇)
2.角色篇(我忘了这个系列叫什么名字,英文只写了:Characters Episode,全是角色独白,有樱花飞舞的CG…)
3. 《Tea Ceremony Event》(为手机版特别制作的,我就翻成《茶道会》吧)!*\(^o^)/*

相信本篇很多吧友已经玩过或者看过CG了,但是《茶道会》在网上还找不到相关翻译或者图片呢,于是我就萌生了制作中英双语《茶道会》的想法,好东西就是要分享的嘛~
所有文字都是我用爪机一点一点码起来的,希望大家喜欢~ 游戏中某些英文用法有点怪怪的,我也只是原文重现,英语很好的吧友就网开一面啦!米娜也可以借此练习一下英文阅读喔~(不要Pia飞我…)|( ̄3 ̄)|

《茶道会》和本篇一样,有六个攻略角色,以雪村千鹤为第一人称描写。
本帖将会按照游戏中选项先后来逐步翻译,即:斋藤一[BLACK RIGHTWARDS ARROW]️藤堂平助[BLACK RIGHTWARDS ARROW]️冲田总司[BLACK RIGHTWARDS ARROW]️原田左之助[BLACK RIGHTWARDS ARROW]️土方岁三[BLACK RIGHTWARDS ARROW]️风间千景(我并不是私心,但最爱的确实是小一,HoHoHo…)
由于上网时间被严格控制,更新时间不定,但预计能在两个月左右更完(但愿如此)…
行啦废话说的有点多,希望大家不介意!
三楼开更!

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-14 17:56:00 +0800 CST  
【Tea Ceremony Event Common route】
【茶道会共线】

[Special episode]
[特别故事]

February 1867
1867年二月

It had been a few months since Lord Yoshinobu became the new shogun.
距离德川庆喜将军即位已经有几个月了。

The Shinsengumi still diligently protected the peace in Kyoto.
新选组还是一如既往,尽心尽力地维护着京都的安全与秩序。

As soon as they finished breakfast this morning, Nagakura and the 2nd division headed out on their rounds.
今天早上,永仓先生和二番组刚吃完早饭,便到街上巡逻去了。

Every time one of them complained about the cold, Nagakura would shout, "Weak! You guys need to get fired up!"
每当有任何人抱怨天气太过寒冷,永仓先生便会喊起来:“太弱啦!你们这群家伙真应该放在火上烤烤!”
(突然想到《雪华录》中雪球丢到新八唧胸前时他蹦来蹦去的样子2333…)

But somehow he's never affected, I thought with a shiver. I rubbed my arms with shaking hands as the wind gusted by.
但无论如何,他却一点儿也没受天气影响,想着想着我不禁打了个冷战。在阵阵寒风中,我不停地用颤抖的手搓搓冻僵的肩膀。

It was warm while the sun was out, but I could clearly see my breath frosting the air in front of me. Spring was still faraway.
有太阳的时候相对来说比较暖和,但我还是能清晰地看见口中哈出的一团团白气。春天依旧是那么遥远。

My sweeping finished, I paused to think if there was anything else I could do.
完成打扫后,我停下来思考着还能做些什么事。

Certainly moving around would keep me warm, right?
随便走走也能让我暖和些,难道不是吗?

I wonder where I should go.
1. Courtyard (Saito and Toudou's route) [WHITE HEAVY CHECK MARK]
2. Kitchen (Okita and Harada's route)
3. Hijikata's room (Hijikata and Kazama's route)
我想知道接下来应该去哪。
1. 庭院(斋藤和藤堂线)[WHITE HEAVY CHECK MARK]
2. 厨房(冲田和原田线)
3. 土方先生的房间(土方和风间线)

共线部分结束!掌声鼓励鼓励~
( ´ ▽ ` )ノ
今天就更到这里了,接下来便是斋藤和藤堂共线!米娜明天再见啦~
(‘ω´ )o

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-14 17:57:00 +0800 CST  
还是想发下角色篇的图片,有哪位好心吧友可以告知一下这个系列叫什么名字…

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-14 17:59:00 +0800 CST  
【Saito and Toudou's Common Route I】
【斋藤和藤堂共线(上)】

I wonder where I should go.
1. Courtyard (Saito and Toudou route)
我想知道接下来应该去哪。
1. 庭院(斋藤和藤堂线)


I don't think I swept the courtyard yet...
我好像还没打扫庭院吧…


A short walk later found me stepping out into the yard and coming face to face with Saito and Heisuke.
短短几步路我便来到了庭院,迎面看见了斋藤先生和平助。


Strangely enough, despite the cold they were covered in sweat.
It seemed like they had just finished training.
很奇怪的是,虽然天气这么冷,他们浑身却被汗给浸湿了。看来训练才刚结束。


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Hey Chizuru! Did you need something?"
{藤堂平助}
“嘿千鹤!有什么事吗?”
(平助小天使上场!)


The moment Heisuke spotted me he gave me an exaggerated wave in greeting.
当平助发现我时,对我大力地挥了挥手。


Saito finished wiping his face off with a towel before glancing over in my direction.
斋藤先生不慌不忙地用毛巾把脸擦干净后,目光才瞥向我。
(好镇定的一君…)


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I thought I might sweep the courtyard. Did you just finish training?"
{雪村千鹤}
“我想正好可以打扫一下庭院。你们的训练刚刚结束吗?”


{Saito Hajime}
"Yes. The 3rd and 8th Divisions completed their session a few moments ago."
{斋藤一}
“是的。三番组和八番组的训练才结束不久。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"I'm totally beat."
{藤堂平助}
“我完全被打败了啊。”


He slumped forward and lolled his head to the side.
平助垂头丧气地说道。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Aren't you cold?"
{雪村千鹤}
“你们难道不冷吗?”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"After working up a sweat, this feels perfect!"
{藤堂平助}
“运动后流点汗的感觉还是很棒的啦!”


{Saito Hajime}
"We could ask you the same question. Cleaning in this weather. You are very dedicated."
{斋藤一}
“我们也可以问你相同的问题啊。毕竟是在这种天气打扫卫生,你非常具有奉献精神。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I don't mind, this is the only way I can help out around here."
{雪村千鹤}
“我并不在意,这也是我唯一能帮忙的事了。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Don't say that! You're already a big help! Even you need to relax sometimes. You work too hard."
{藤堂平助}
“不要这么说!你已经帮了大忙啦!真的很辛苦呢,你有时候还是需要休息一下的。”


I felt my face warm.
我的脸开始发烫。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"No, it's nothing like that."
{雪村千鹤}
“不,并不是这样的。”


I'd been given the position of Hijikata's page while living with the Shinsengumi.
自从与新选组住在一起的那天起,我被任命为土方先生的侍童。


However, I can't go out on rounds or help them keep the peace, so the only thing I can do is clean...
然而,我却不能够与大家一样出去巡逻或者维护京都的治安,现在我唯一能做的便是打扫卫生了…


{Toudou Heisuke}
"But I have to admit, it'd be great if you could make food everyday."
{藤堂平助}
“但是我必须承认,如果你能天天为我们做饭那就太好了。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Huh?"
{雪村千鹤}
“哈?” O_O


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Your cooking is way more delicious than anything anyone else attempts around here."
{藤堂平助}
“这边任何一人做的料理都不能和你做的美味相比啊!”
(脑补一群用刀的大男人做出来的菜…啧啧…)


{Saito Hajime}
"I agree. Meals would taste much better, but we can't have her cook for us every time."
{斋藤一}
“我同意。饭菜确实会比较好吃,但也不能让她天天为我们做饭吧。”
(我们都愿意为你们天天做饭23333…)


To think that they'd say that about my cooking...
没想到他们居然会这么夸奖我做的料理…


Even though I can't do anything, they make sure to take care of me.
虽然不能做任何事,但他们还是非常照顾我。


I was touched by their kind words.
我被他们的善良话语感动了。


My face heated up even more. I didn't know what to say in response.
脸愈发的烫了,我不知道究竟该说些什么来回应。


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Hold on, I thought I saw Souji and Sano in the kitchen earlier. Don't tell me they are making lunch today..."
{藤堂平助}
“等等,早些时候我好像看见总司和左之先生在厨房呢。不要告诉我今天是他们准备午饭…”
(大家都知道这种事的严重后果… 呵呵...)


{Saito Hajime}"
They are. Souji's cooking is... Questionable."
{斋藤一}
“是他们。总司的料理… 有问题。”
(小心被总司听见喔嘻嘻~)


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Sano's too. He loves doing it, but man does he suck."
{藤堂平助}
“左之先生也是啊。他很喜欢做,但天哪简直糟糕透了。”
(孩子你做的料理又如何呢?¬_¬)


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Um..."
{雪村千鹤}
“呃…”


I had to admit that the thought of the two of them in the kitchen preparing today's lunch made me anticipate the meal with some trepidation.
老实说,光是想想那两人在厨房里准备午餐的情景,就足以让我对今天的饭菜充满了恐惧。


Maybe I should go offer to help.
也许我应该去那里帮忙吧。


Just then...
就在这时...

<未完待续>
究竟接下来会发生什么事呢,某位大人物要登场啦…
先卖个关子,等一下进行二更!
(・ω・)ノ逃脱爸妈的目光正在加紧码字中………

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-15 13:29:00 +0800 CST  
为什么没有人来…
(;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-15 13:48:00 +0800 CST  
刚回到家发现有小伙伴在看,突然觉得又有更下去的动力了!
来吧二更开始!

【Saito and Toudou's Common Route II】
【斋藤和藤堂共线(下)】

Just then...
就在这时...

{Kondou Isami}
"Ah, Yukimura, here you are. I was just looking for you."
{近藤勇}
“啊,雪村君,原来你在这里。我正想找你呢。”
(局长大人登场!\(^O^))

Kondou appeared from around a corner and made his way toward us.
近藤先生从一个拐角处向我们走来。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Do you need something?"
{雪村千鹤}
“您有什么需要吗?”


{Kondou Isami}
"I wanted to ask a favour. Oh! Heisuke and Saito. Training done for today?"
{近藤勇}
“我想请你办一件事。噢!平助和斋藤也在这。今天的训练结束了?”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Yeah. We just finished putting the guys through their workout."
{藤堂平助}
“是啊。我们刚和队里的家伙热热身,锻炼了几下。”


{Saito Hajime}
"We're wiping ourselves down."
{斋藤一}
“现在可是汗流浃背呢。"


{Kondou Isami}
"I see. Sorry for leaving you guys to take care of all that. I appreciate it.
Ah, next time I will make sure to join you. Training is important. We need everyone to be ready in case of an emergency.
To do that, we need to prepare—"
{近藤勇}
“原来如此,真抱歉让你们俩负责那么多事务。我一向心怀感激。
啊,下次我一定加入你们。训练是非常重要的,要确保每个人在紧急情况下都能以不变应万变。
如此看来,我们需要准备—”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Uh, hey Kondou? I thought you needed to ask something?"
{藤堂平助}
“呃,近藤先生?你好像一开始是想问些什么事吧?”
(哈哈哈局长的重点又飞到九霄云外了…)


{Kondou Isami}
"Oh, that's right! Yukimura, I have a favour to ask you."
{近藤勇}
“噢,确实是这样!雪村君,我有一事相求。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Of me?"
{雪村千鹤}
“找我?”


{Kondou Isami}
"Yeah. You know that big snack shop at the corner of Shijo and Karasuma?"
{近藤勇}
“没错,你知道位于四条和乌丸拐角处之间的那家很大的和菓子店吗?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Yes."
{雪村千鹤}
“知道。”


I still wasn't that familiar with Kyoto, but I did remember the large store that sold snacks there.
我对京都还不是非常熟悉,但我确实记得那里有这样的一家和菓子店。


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Shijo... Didn't Sano arrest a ronin kicking up a fuss there?"
{藤堂平助}
“四条… 好像左之先生曾经在那里逮捕了一个不法浪人吧?”


{Kondou Isami}
"Yeah. They bring us sweets every once in a while, or take me out to dinner, as a sign of thanks.
I was just invited by the owner to sample their newest treat. They're holding a tea ceremony to get the public's feedback.
I've been told the new confection was made with female customers in mind."
{近藤勇}
“是啊。为了表示感谢,他们经常隔三差五地送来些菓子或者请我吃晚餐呢。
刚刚接到店主的邀请,他希望我能前去品尝店内的最新产品。他们准备策划一场茶道会,以此征集群众意见。
这一季的菓子据说是为女性顾客量身定做的喔。”


{Saito Hajime}
"And that is why you wish to take Yukimura."
{斋藤一}
“这便是您想邀请雪村君的理由,是吧。”


{Kondou Isami}
"Right."
{近藤勇}
“没错。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"M-Me?"
{雪村千鹤}
“我-我?”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"That sounds perfect. I mean, you're a real girl after all."
{藤堂平助}
“听起来还不赖啊。我是说,你毕竟是个女孩子嘛。”


{Kondou Isami}
"How about it, Yukimura?
Although they're serving tea, it's not supposed to be very formal. All you have to do is eat the treat and be honest."
{近藤勇}
“雪村君,你觉得呢?
虽然会有茶道表演,但也不是什么正式场合。你只需要好好品尝菓子,诚实地告诉他们你的意见就行了。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Sure. If my opinion can be of any help..."
{雪村千鹤}
“当然可以,如果我的意见能发挥一些作用…”


{Kondou Isami}
"So you'll do it? Great! Thanks. I owe you one!
There's one problem though. Some business came up and I can't go anymore. But I don't want you to go alone..."
{近藤勇}
“那么就说定啦?太好了!非常感谢,这次就算是我欠你的!
但是现在有个问题。一些公务让我实在是脱不开身,我也不希望你单独前去…”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"All right, then I'll go! It means I'll get to eat delicious snacks, right? Let's do it, Hajime!"
{藤堂平助}
“好吧,那么我就代替您去!顺便还可以吃些菓子是不?走走走,一君也去!”


{Saito Hajime}
"I... Would prefer not..."
{斋藤一}
“我…并不是很想去…”


{Kondou Isami}
"The thing is. I already told them two people would show up...
So if either you or Saito would go with her, it'd be a big help.
Hmm... Who do you think would be good to take, Yukimura?"
{近藤勇}
“但是,我已经告诉店主我们只会派两个人参加…
如果你和斋藤之间有一个人能去就已经是帮大忙了。
嗯…雪村君,你觉得应该和谁一起去?”


It appeared as if Kondou was going to leave it up to me to decide.
看来近藤先生把这一次的选择权交给我了。


Maybe…
1. Saito [WHITE HEAVY CHECK MARK]
2. Heisuke
也许和…
1. 斋藤 [WHITE HEAVY CHECK MARK]
2. 平助


<未完待续>
接下来便是斋藤线了,敬请期待喔!
顺便为不知道的吧友介绍一下,摘自维基百科:
和菓子(わがし wagashi)就是日本式糖果糕点和甜品冰品的总称。主要的原料包括糖,米,糯米和小麦粉等,并依照不同的口味添加不同的特殊食材,传统上一般会佐茶品尝。
京都的和菓子店非常多,色彩也很鲜艳,大家有机会去可以品尝一下!

滚去翻译下一部分,大家明天见~
°°・(>_<)・°°


楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-15 18:27:00 +0800 CST  
【Saito's Route I】
【斋藤线(一)】


Maybe…
1. Saito
也许和…
1. 斋藤


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"How about Saito?"
{雪村千鹤}
“和斋藤一起去怎么样?”


{Kondou Isami}
"I see. I could definitely leave it to him without worrying. So, are you willing Saito?"
{近藤勇}
“好啊。交给他我可是一点也不担心。斋藤君你愿意吗?”




{Saito Hajime}
"Okay."
{斋藤一}
“好的。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Aww, I wanted to go too... Well, I don't mind if Hajime's the one with her."
{藤堂平助}
“噢,我也好想去啊… 不过如果是一君和她在一起的话,我倒并不介意。”
(你分明就是醋坛子翻了的前奏啊,哈哈…)


{Kondou Isami}
"I'll let you handle it then. That store is a patron of ours."
{近藤勇}
“斋藤君,我就全权交给你负责了。那家店可是我们的资金赞助商啊。”


{Saito Hajime}
"Understood."
{斋藤一}
“明白。”


{Kondou Isami}
"I know you'll make me proud, Yukimura."
{近藤勇}
“雪村君,相信你一定能让我以你为傲。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Yes! I'll try my best!"
{雪村千鹤}
“是!我肯定会好好表现的!”


And so, Saito and I were the ones who ended up attending the tea ceremony.
就这样,大家最终决定让斋藤先生和我一起参加茶道会。
----------
The next day.
第二天。


Saito and I took the main Kyoto road.
我和斋藤先生走在京都的主干道上。




He walked a step ahead of me, but I could see he was clearly checking his pace so I didn't fall too far behind.
虽然走在我前面,但我可以清楚地看见他时时刻刻都在调整步伐节奏,以确保我能跟得上他。
(好贴心的小一!)


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Um, I can walk a little faster."
{雪村千鹤}
“嗯,我应该走快点。”


I sped up to match his pace, but Saito slowed even further.
我越走越快,希望能与他步伐一致,但是斋藤先生却相反地放慢了速度。


{Saito Hajime}
"We aren't in any danger of arriving late, so there's no need to rush."
{斋藤一}
“我们并没有迟到的风险,你不用走那么快。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Thank you.
Um, Saito?"
{雪村千鹤}
“好吧,谢谢。
呃,斋藤先生?”


{Saito Hajime}
"What is it?"
{斋藤一}
“怎么了?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Have you ever taken part in a tea ceremony like this before? "
{雪村千鹤}
“你曾经参加过任何像这样的茶道会吗?”


{Saito Hajime}
"No... I've been to a regular one, but..."
{斋藤一}
“没有… 我参加过一些比起这个更加正式的,但是…”
(话又一次地没讲完…)


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"This is my first time. I'm afraid I'm going to make a fool of myself."
{雪村千鹤}
“这还是我第一次参加呢。我有点害怕等一会儿会出丑。”


{Saito Hajime}
"There's no cause to be nervous. The Chief has started it's nothing formal."
{斋藤一}
“你不需要这么紧张。局长说这并不是很正式的茶道会。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Really?"
{雪村千鹤}
“真的吗?”


{Saito Hajime}
"Yes. All you need to do is eat the sweets and be honest."
{斋藤一}
“没错。你只需要品尝菓子,诚实地说出你的看法就行了。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"O-Okay. I can do that..."
{雪村千鹤}
“好-好吧。我能做到的…”


It being a tea ceremony implies that the event was formal, but if it's not then it should be all right...
茶道会应该是一个很正式的场合,但如果能轻松点应该不会有什么问题吧…


{Saito Hajime}
"Over there."
{斋藤一}
“就在那里。”




I looked in the direction Saito pointed and saw the store.
顺着斋藤先生所指的方向,我看到了那家和菓子店。


The moment we stepped inside the store, someone came to greet us.
刚一进门,有人便出来招呼我们了。


{Store Employee}
"Welcome. You're here to attend the tea ceremony, right?"
{店员}
“欢迎光临。你们是来这里参加茶道会的吗?”


{Saito Hajime}
"Yes. The Chief of the Shinsengumi was invited, but I have come in his place. I am Saito, Captain of the 3rd Division. This is our commander's page."
{斋藤一}
“没错。受新选组局长委托,我是三番组组长斋藤一,特地来代替他参加此次活动。这位是我们副长的侍童。”


{Store Employee}
"Thank you for taking the time to come out. I'll show you to the room."
{店员}
“您能在百忙之中抽空出来参加茶道会,真的是非常感谢。请进,我将会带您入座。”


Saito and I were guided to the back of the store.
店员领着斋藤先生和我,向店内走去。






<未完待续>
究竟接下来会发生什么事呢,嘿嘿…
斋藤线将被分为四部分,今天有点事不能二更,(其实也就是没有时间慢慢翻译啦…)于是…
大家明天见~ *\(^o^)/*

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-16 14:24:00 +0800 CST  
【Saito's Route II】
【斋藤线(二)】


A few groups of customers were already inside, and they were all conversing comfortably with each other.
店内,早已有几组人坐在一起谈天说地了。


Each person didn't have to make a speech about their opinion of the new sweet. They only had to eat it and speak with the staff.
顾客并不需要公开发表自己的看法,品尝菓子后,他们都分别将个人意见私下告诉了店员。


Saito was right. It wasn't very formal.
斋藤先生说的没错,这不是什么正式严肃的茶道会。


{Saito Hajime}
"Yukimura."
{斋藤一}
“雪村君。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Yes?"
{雪村千鹤}
“是?”


{Saito Hajime}
"Our seats are over here."
{斋藤一}
“我们的座位在这里。”


We sat down at the table that was prepared for us.
在精心准备的小方桌前,我们一并坐下了。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I'm relieved. It seems rather casual."
{雪村千鹤}
“看起来并不像想象的那样正式嘛,真是令人松了口气。”


{Saito Hajime}
"Yes. But do not forget we were invited as representatives of the Shinsengumi and must act as such."
{斋藤一}
“没错。但不要忘了我们是以新选组代表的身份参加,还是要好好注意下自己的言行举止。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Okay."
{雪村千鹤}
“是。”


{Saito Hajime}
"And...I must leave the commenting on sweets to you.
I am... Unfamiliar with them, nor do I know which women would prefer."
{斋藤一}
“然后…我只能把评价菓子的任务交给你了。
我…对这方面并不了解,也不知道女性会喜欢什么类型。”
(小一脸红了哟… —w—)




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I'll do my best."
{雪村千鹤}
“我一定会尽力而为。”


After waiting a short while, a tray was brought out to us.
不一会儿,店员将托盘端了过来。


I pulled off the covering to find a collection of beautifully coloured treats arranged on it.
我揭开盘盖,映入眼帘的是一系列整齐排放,色彩鲜艳的和菓子。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Ah! So pretty!"
{雪村千鹤}
“啊!真漂亮!”


{Saito Hajime}
"Very impressive."
{斋藤一}
“令人钦佩。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"It seems like they're shaped as flowers for the seasons.
The cherry blossom is for spring, and the chrysanthemum for fall..."
{雪村千鹤}
“看来他们是以季节为概念制作菓子形状的。
樱花菓子代表春天,而这个菊花菓子代表秋天…”


{Saito Hajime}
"..."
{斋藤一}
“…”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"This one's a Japanese morning glory, so it must be for summer.
Wait... I don't see a winter flower."
{雪村千鹤}
“这是朝颜,那么便是代表夏天。
等等…我好像没看见代表冬天的花。”
(注:日本称牵牛花为朝颜)


{Saito Hajime}
"A winter flower?"
{斋藤一}
“冬天的花?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Yes. I thought it'd be more fun if they were going for seasonal flowers to have some from all four seasons."
{雪村千鹤}
“是啊。如果他们想运用四季的概念,我认为制作代表所有季节的花朵应该会更有意思吧。”


{Saito Hajime}
"Hm. I can't really think of one that could be considered a winter flower."
{斋藤一}
“呃。我想不到任何能代表冬季的花。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"True... But what about a camellia, or a daffodil?"
{雪村千鹤}
“确实是呢…对了,山茶花或者水仙怎么样?”


{Saito Hajime}
"You certainly know a lot about flowers."
{斋藤一}
“看来你真的对花非常了解。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Well, I just like them, that's all."
{雪村千鹤}
“其实,我只不过是喜欢花而已。”


{Saito Hajime}
"I see..."
{斋藤一}
“原来是这样啊…”


Saito gave a small sigh.
斋藤先生轻轻地叹了口气。


Maybe he's getting annoyed with me...
也许他对我说的话感到厌烦了吧…


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Um... I'm sorry, I think I carried on too much."
{雪村千鹤}
“呃…对不起,我有些过于沉浸在自己的世界里了。”


{Saito Hajime}
"No. It had nothing to do with what you said.I thought it interesting that you liked flowers.
It took me a moment to remember that you were a girl."
{斋藤一}
“不不不,这和你所说的事情无关。起初对于你喜欢花这一事实,我感到非常惊讶。
那么一瞬间我才突然回想起来,你原本就是个女生啊。”
(很喜欢这个因为震惊眼睛瞪大的天然颜~)




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Well I don't know much. I just enjoy them a lot."
{雪村千鹤}
“只是单纯的喜欢罢了,其实不怎么了解。”


Self conscious, I cast my eyes down, but Saito shook his head.
意识到自己身为女性的事实,出于害羞,我不自在地垂下眼帘。但是斋藤先生却在此时摇了摇头。


{Saito Hajime}
"There's an old saying: If you like something, you are naturally knowledgeable about it.You have no need to fear stating your views on this topic."
{斋藤一}
“俗话说:爱屋及乌。你并不需要因为说出内心的想法而感到害怕。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"...Okay!"
{雪村千鹤}
“…嗯!”


He coughed into his fist.
他对着拳头轻轻干咳一声。
(再次害羞了…)






<未完待续>
相信很多人会好奇这些和菓子究竟长什么样吧…
楼主从度娘的旦那桑—>谷哥那里扒了些图。地址:http://www.toukaya.com/product.php?sn=14






这家店虽然是在台湾… 但里面的季节性和菓子比较全,大家可以去看看。
今天就到这里了! 滚去翻译下一段,顺便开始码平助线的英文。
想咆哮一下:为什么没有人来啊啊啊,难道是因为小一线太纯情少年吗… ಥ_ಥ (哭)

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-17 18:28:00 +0800 CST  
【Saito's Route III】
【斋藤线(三)】


I made sure to give my honest feedback to the staff.
我坦率地将自己的意见反馈给店员。




Well, truthfully, it was all delicious. I don't think I helped very much as I couldn't come up with any way they could improve on it.
老实说,所有的菓子都非常美味。我真的无法想到任何有建设性的评价,自认为帮助不大。


But since they were going with a flower theme, I did mention it might be good to have some from each season.
但是,既然是以花为主题,我向店员提出如果能制作更多代表四季的花朵菓子,效果会更好。


They seemed pleased and told me my suggestion was very helpful, so I guess I succeeded at the job that was given to me.
他们看起来对我的反馈十分满意,那么这个大家托付于我的任务算是成功了吧。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Everything was really delicious, wasn't it?"
{雪村千鹤}
“所有的菓子都非常好吃啊,是不是?”


{Saito Hajime}
"Yes. I don't eat sweets often, unlike Souji. But the ones we are today were tasty.The store seemed grateful for your feedback."
{斋藤一}
“是啊。虽然我并不像总司一样吃那么多甜食,但今天吃到的确实很美味。那家菓子店也非常感激你的建议。”
(小一这个时候还惦念着总司哟,怎么没打包呢~(¬_¬) 好吧我去面壁。)


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Ah... I hope it can be of use..."
{雪村千鹤}
“啊…希望我说的能帮到他们吧…”


{Saito Hajime}
"I'm certain the input from a girl like you is exactly what they were looking for."
{斋藤一}
“我觉得,像你这样的女孩子对菓子的想法就是他们一直想要了解的。”




Whenever Saito acknowledges I'm a girl, for some reason I get self conscious...
每当斋藤先生提起我是个女孩子时,我便感到害羞,不由自主地开始注意自己的举止…


In an effort to avoid his eyes, I glanced around the city. Suddenly, I realised the sun was about to set.
我慌张地扫视城市的街道,试着去躲避他的目光。这时我才意识到已是傍晚时分,太阳即将下山了。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"The sunset is beautiful."
{雪村千鹤}
“夕阳真美啊。”
(想岔开话题的某人...)


{Saito Hajime}
"It is."
{斋藤一}
“是啊。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"The buildings are hiding most of it, but I'm sure it looks amazing over by the river."
{雪村千鹤}
“去河边看落日一定非常漂亮呢,大部分晚霞都被街道上的房子遮住了。”


{Saito Hajime}
"..."
{斋藤一}
“…”


A whisper of moment and Saito began walking. I did my best to keep up.
停顿了一下,斋藤先生再次开始往前走。我马上跟了上去。


A short while later, we reached the riverside.
不一会儿,我们便来到河畔。


We seemed to be on a different path than the one we took to the store...
这和早些时候去菓子店所走的不是一条路啊…


The streets of Kyoto were still pretty unfamiliar to me, but this had to be out of our way if we were intending to return to the temple.
京都的街道对于我还是十分陌生,但是我很确定这并不是回西本愿寺的方向。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Saito. Do you have business somewhere?"
{雪村千鹤}
“呃,斋藤先生,你要去别处办什么事吗?”


{Saito Hajime}
"No. I felt this path would allow us to see the sunset better."
{斋藤一}
“不。我只是觉得走这条路能让我们更好地欣赏落日。”
(小一这句话目测震趴了一群Otome。)


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Huh?"
{雪村千鹤}
“哈?”


Saito stopped.
斋藤先生停了下来。




<未完待续>
天然还终归是天然。千鹤妹子想象的在河边和心爱的人(误)看夕阳那么罗曼蒂克的场景,小一你是不懂装懂还是真的纯粹为了自己看风景呢… Orz
卡在这么个节骨眼上… 接下来的部分有斋藤线特别CG原谅我吧原谅我吧~
P.S. 用爪机的缘故一抬头看见的都是星星…
''·*:•.。.(☆_☆).。.•:*·''

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-18 14:07:00 +0800 CST  
【Saito's Route IV】
【斋藤线(四)】


Saito stopped.
斋藤先生停了下来。
(特别CG登场~~~)




{Saito Hajime}
"You're not allowed to roam freely in most situations. There is no harm in taking the long route home on a day like this."
{斋藤一}
“在大多数情况下,你都没有自由活动的权利。像今天这样好的日子,绕点远路回去应该没什么关系吧。”
(我看是想和千鹤单独多呆一会吧!XD)


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Th-Thank you very much."
{雪村千鹤}
“非-非常感谢。”


My heart thumped painfully when I realised he was being considerate, just for me.
心好像被什么东西击中了一样,生疼生疼的。一路上他考虑那么多,仅仅只是为了我。


The sky seemed even more vivid here than when we were walking along the main road.
比起主干道,河畔天边的晚霞被夕阳染得更加生动绚丽。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"It's beautiful. It makes me sad to think it only lasts a short while before darkness takes over..."
{雪村千鹤}
“真的很漂亮啊。虽然感到一丝悲伤,这样的美景即将会被黑暗吞噬…”
(日式物哀…)


{Saito Hajime}
"True. It's rather melancholy, but you can't deny it's stunning when the sky is dyed red."
{斋藤一}
“没错,此情此景着实令人伤感。但是你却不能否认当青空被染成这么耀眼的红色时,那种震撼人心的力量。”
(文艺青年小一~)


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"You're right."
{雪村千鹤}
“说的也是呢。”


We stood there silently, watching the sun dip below the horizon. I glanced over at Saito beside me.
我们静静地伫立在河畔,遥望落日消失在地平线的那头。我望向站在身旁的斋藤先生。


I was nearly dazzled by the sight of him, a haze of red light reflecting on him from the setting sun.
天边红色的霞光映照在他的脸上,是那么耀眼,令我一阵目眩。
(换成日常用语:小一你帅呆了… (☆_☆))




{Saito Hajime}
"What is it?"
{斋藤一}
“怎么了?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"N-Nothing."
{雪村千鹤}
“没-没什么。”


Our eyes met amidst the glow, and I quickly looked away.
四目相对。我飞快地看向一旁,脸上泛起一阵红晕。


{Saito Hajime}
"We should return before it gets too dark."
{斋藤一}“我们应该赶在天黑前回去呢。”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Okay."
{雪村千鹤}
“嗯。”


The sky slowly darkened as we continued down the path.
走在小道上,天色已逐渐变暗。


Our shadows stretched longer and longer in front of us.
我们两人的影子也在前方不断地被残阳拉长。


I stared at the two next to each other as we made our way to the road that lead back to headquarters.
直到走上回屯所的大路之前,我一直都在默默地注视着,两人依偎在一起的影子。




<THE END>
斋藤线完结撒花~ ☆*:.。. \(^o^)/ .。.:*☆
这算是六人当中最治愈,微甜的线吧,虽然还是有点淡淡的忧伤。(在平助线我会解释为什么)
P.S. 今天二更哟,稍作休息晚上开始平助线!除了留言的吧友外,但愿还是有人在看的吧…

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-19 13:12:00 +0800 CST  
【Toudou's Route I】
【藤堂线(一)】


(接十四楼“斋藤和藤堂共线(下)”)


Maybe…
1. Heisuke
也许和…
1. 平助


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"How about Heisuke?"
{雪村千鹤}
“和平助君一起去怎么样?”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Awesome! That means I can go, right Kondou?"
{藤堂平助}
“太棒了!近藤先生,这就表示我可以去了吧?”


{Kondou Isami}
"Sure. The store is a patron of ours, so make me proud.
Be on your best behaviour."
{近藤勇}
“当然。那家店可是我们的资金赞助商,一定要好好表现让我以你们为傲啊。”




{Saito Hajime}
"I leave Yukimura in your care, Heisuke."
{斋藤一}
“平助,雪村君的人身安全就交给你了。”




{Toudou Heisuke}
"Got it!"
{藤堂平助}
“明白!”




{Kondou Isami}
"And thank you, Yukimura."
{近藤勇}
“谢谢你雪村君。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I'll try my best!"
{雪村千鹤}
“是!我肯定会好好表现的!”


And so, Heisuke and I were the ones who ended up going to the tea ceremony.
就这样,大家最终决定让平助君和我一起参加茶道会。


----------


The next day.
第二天。


Heisuke and I took the main road of Kyoto.
我和平助君走在京都的主干道上。


It's rare to be able to walk alone with him. So rare that it almost felt like a new experience.
和平助君两人一起走在京都街头,这种情况还是第一次,令我感到十分新鲜。


{Toudou Heisuke}
"I wonder what this tea ceremony where you eat sweets is going to be like?"
{藤堂平助}
“欸,我在想,品尝菓子的茶道会究竟是什么样子的啊?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I'm wondering that, too. I don't really know the etiquette for tea ceremonies. I hope that's all right..."
{雪村千鹤}
“我也在想同样的事呢。我并不怎么了解茶道会的规矩,希望一切能够顺利进行…”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Well, Kondou told us it wasn't all that formal. So, don't worry."
{藤堂平助}
“但是近藤先生说过,这个茶道会并不是特别正式嘛。你就不要担心啦。”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Okay."
{雪村千鹤}
“嗯。”


Even so, I could feel my nerves increasing.
虽说如此,我还是感到越来越紧张。


But Kondou had asked this favour of me, so I had to try my best.
既然是近藤先生给我的任务,我一定要做到最好才行。


The rest of the trip was quiet as we both imagined how the ceremony would go, and before we knew it we'd arrived.
余下的路程,我们两人都很沉默,陷入了对茶道会的各种幻想。不知不觉中我们就到了。


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Oh hey, isn't this the place?"
{藤堂平助}
“嘿,就是这里吧?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"W-We're here."
{雪村千鹤}
“我-我们到了。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Don't worry. Just tell them what you think."
{藤堂平助}
“放轻松点,告诉他们你的真实想法就行啦。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"O-Okay!"
{雪村千鹤}
“好-好的!”


The moment we stepped inside the store, someone came to greet us.
刚一进门,有人便出来招呼我们了。


{Store Employee}
"Welcome. You're here to attend the tea ceremony, right?"
{店员}
“欢迎光临。你们是来这里参加茶道会的吗?”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Yes. I've come in place of the Chief of the Shinsengumi. I'm Toudou Heisuke, Captain of the 8th division. This is Yukimura, our page."
{藤堂平助}
“没错。我是八番组组长藤堂平助,受新选组局长委托前来代替他参加活动。这位是雪村君,我们的侍童。”


{Store Employee}
"Thank you for taking the time to come out. I'll show you to the room."
{店员}
“您能在百忙之中抽空出来参加茶道会,真的是非常感谢。请进,我将会带您入座。”


Heisuke and I were guided to the back of the store.
店员领着平助君和我,向店内走去。




<未完待续>
藤堂线同样分为四小节,今天的部分其实跟斋藤线差不多呢。
尝试着用平助的感觉翻译对话… 嘛,最终就是这样啦。
店内这一次又会发生什么呢… 呵呵拭目以待吧大家明天见!(^—^)/

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-19 21:37:00 +0800 CST  
【Toudou's Route II】
【藤堂线(二)】


A few groups of customers were already inside, and they were all conversing comfortably with each other.
店内,早已有几组人坐在一起谈天说地了。


{Toudou Heisuke}
"All right. It doesn't look too formal after all."
{藤堂平助}
“还好还好,看起来不是那么正式嘛。”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Yes. I'm a little relieved."
{雪村千鹤}
“嗯,真是松了口气。”


I'd pictured people getting up one by one and giving their feedback, but it seemed like you just casually spoke with the stuff.
我原本以为每位顾客都需要依次站在众人面前,高声发表自己对菓子的看法。然而事实上,只需要私下告知店员便行了。


It was more relaxed than I'd expected, and it felt as if a huge weight lifted off my shoulders.
我感到肩上的重担突然轻了许多,这可比想象中要来得轻松啊。


{Store Employee}
"Come sit here, please."
{店员}
“请二位在此入座。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Right."
{藤堂平助}
“好的。”


As we sat down at the table, some tea was brought out for us.
当我们坐在方桌前的同时,茶水也端上来了。


{Store Employee}
"I will be bringing the sweets over momentarily. Please enjoy yourselves in the meantime."
{店员}
“请稍等片刻,我将尽快把菓子端过来。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Um, would it be possible for me to say hello to the owner?"
{藤堂平助}
“嗯,请问我能跟店长打个招呼吗?”




{Store Employee}
"He is currently in his room. Shall I take you there?"
{店员}
“行,店长现在正好在他的房间里。我在前面带路。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Please."
{藤堂平助}
“请。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Chizuru, I'll go and pay our respects. Could you wait here?"
{藤堂平助}
“千鹤,我去给店长打个招呼,在这里等我一下,好吗?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"All right."
{雪村千鹤}
“好。”


Heisuke got up and followed the employee out of the room.
平助君站起来,跟着店员走出房间。


Left on my own, I passed the time by looking at everything and imaging what kind of sweet I was going to get to taste.
为了打发时间,我细细打量着周围的一切,盼望并想象着究竟会有什么样的菓子等待着我。


{Store Employee}
"Oh!"
{店员}
“啊!”


**玻璃破碎声**


I quickly spun around at the sound of a voice behind me.
我立马转身,向声音传来的方向望去。


The employee who had shown Heisuke to the owner appeared to have flipped her tray. Tea cups were all over the floor.
看来,刚刚为平助君带路的那位店员不小心打翻了托盘。地上一片狼藉。


I rushed over.
我匆忙赶了过去。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Are you okay?"
{雪村千鹤}
“你没事吧?”


{Store employee}
"I'm very sorry, I slipped... Please take your seat. I'll clean this up..."
{店员}
“真是不好意思,我不小心滑了一跤…请您回到座位上,我会把这里收拾干净的…”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Oh, no. I'll help you."
{雪村千鹤}
“喔,没事。我来帮你。”
(善良的千鹤ちゃん!)


I picked up an extra cloth and began wiping away the mess.
我拿起一块抹布,开始将地上清理干净。


After placing the cups back on the tray, I stood up.
当把所有的杯子放置在托盘上后,我站了起来。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I think the tatami should be wiped one last time. May I borrow some water?"
{雪村千鹤}
“我想这块榻榻米应该再清理一遍,能借把手给我点水吗?”


{Store Employee}
"It wouldn't be right if I let you help me more..."
{店员}
“让您帮忙清理,实在是令人过意不去…”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Well, I'm just waiting for someone, so I have the time."
{雪村千鹤}
“没事,我只不过是在等人而已,有的是时间。”


{Store Employee}
"Are you sure...? Please follow me, then."
{店员}
“您确定吗…?那好,请跟我来。”




**一番清理游戏黑屏之后**


{Store Employee}
"You were a big help. Thank you so much."
{店员}
“您真是帮了大忙啊,真的非常非常感谢。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I didn't mind. I'll return to my seat now....Huh?"
{雪村千鹤}
“没事我一点也不介意,我现在就回到座位上去。嗯…哈?”




<未完待续>
一秒回归清洁小队长身份,店员桑就在那傻站着等千鹤清理榻榻米吗2333…
千鹤究竟看到听到了什么居然那么吃惊呢,某位好像被游戏组遗忘了吧…
明天请继续关注吖~ (^_^)Y

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-20 14:24:00 +0800 CST  
【Toudou's Route III】
【藤堂线(三)】


I heard shouting coming from the direction of my table. Did something happen...
一阵阵的喊叫声从我的座位方向传过来。难道有什么事发生了吗…


Wait, the voice sounded familiar...
等等,那个声音怎么听起来那么熟悉…


**声音从遥远的地方传来**


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Chizuru! Where are you?! Hey!"
{藤堂平助}
“嘿,千鹤!你在哪啊?喂!!!”
(大家可以回想一下《雪华录》,平助发现千鹤妹子不见时在走廊狂奔的情形…)




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"H-Heisuke?!"
{雪村千鹤}
“平-平助君?!”


**回到房间**


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Chizuru! I'm so glad...! Are you okay? Nothing happened to you?"
{藤堂平助}
“喂!千鹤!我的天哪真是太好了…!你没事吧?没发生什么问题吧?”
(小天使炸毛的样子很萌啊 =w=)




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"What do you mean? Is something wrong?"
{雪村千鹤}
“什么意思?你遇到什么麻烦了吗?”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"That's my line! Are you really okay?"
{藤堂平助}
“拜托那可是我想问你的!你真的真的没事吧?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Well... I was just helping one of the employees..."
{雪村千鹤}
“呃…我刚才只不过是给一位店员帮忙去了…”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Huh?"
{藤堂平助}
“哈?” (O_O)




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"What is it, Heisuke? What's wrong?"
{雪村千鹤}
“为什么露出这样的表情啊,平助君?究竟怎么了?”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Well, you'd just vanished. I kind of panicked."
{藤堂平助}
“啊,刚刚一眨眼的功夫你就消失了。差点把我给吓傻啦。”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"But it was only for a few minutes. You didn't have to worry so much."
{雪村千鹤}
“不过才几分钟而已嘛,你不需要那么为我担心。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"I'd heard some Satsuma guys might be here. You know how they were after you?"
{藤堂平助}
“据传闻说有几个萨摩藩的人可能会在这里出现,你难道不知道他们盯上你的严重后果吗?”


{Store Employee}
"Excuse me... Is something the matter?"
{店员}
“不好意思…请问客官有什么事吗?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"O-Oh! Nothing's wrong! Right, Heisuke?"
{雪村千鹤}
“哦-哦!我们没事,什么问题都没有!呃,是不是啊,平助君?”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"U-Uh huh. Yeah! Nothing at all! I apologise for disturbing everyone!"
{藤堂平助}
“呃-呃,嗯,是啊是啊!什么事都没发生!各位真是对不起啊,我刚刚失态了啊哈哈哈!”
(少年你脸红了哟~)




**平助道歉过后转向千鹤**
{Toudou Heisuke}
"Sorry, Chizuru. I kind of jumped to conclusions there."
{藤堂平助}
“对不起,千鹤。我刚刚过于草率,言行有点失控了。”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I don't mind. You were worried about me, right?"
{雪村千鹤}
“没事我并不在意。你只不过是为我担心,不是吗?”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Well, yeah... But I must've embarrassed you."
{藤堂平助}
“啊,是啊…但是我的举动一定带给你很多尴尬吧。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"It's fine. Come on. We should get back to our table so we can eat the sweets."
{雪村千鹤}
“真的没有关系。过来吧,我们应该回到座位上去品尝菓子啦。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Yeah, you're right. Let eat!"
{藤堂平助}
“耶,你说的没错。我们去吃菓子吧!”




<未完待续>
算是翻译过程中最欢乐的部分了,基本上总结了平助所有的表情,哈哈哈…
大家看得开心吗?|( ̄3 ̄)|
不知不觉平助篇也要结束了… 下一章又会有特别CG喔~
是时候开始码原田和冲田的共线了!每天都有更新的楼主是不是很棒?(笑)

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-21 12:34:00 +0800 CST  
嘿嘿嘿…下午去图书馆还书,居然发现了司马辽太郎的《血风录》!\(^o^)/




书背后的介绍也好燃……




很兴奋地借了,回到家翻开目录…





我想说,为什么那个《冲田总司之恋》那么的吸引眼球… ∑(O。O)
(好吧为了总司的各种CP党我去面壁Orz)


读着读着发现了一些有趣又奇怪(?)的东西,然后就手痒痒了…
呃,大家说,我是应该新开一个吐槽帖分享一下还是就丢在这里算了…
喂喂喂有人吗……… (╥﹏╥)

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-21 15:49:00 +0800 CST  
秉承着好东西就要分享的原则,我还是发一些《血风录》的片段来吐槽吧有点憋得慌(周围没有人能理解这种对比之后的乐趣)………
动漫总是与历史惊人的相似!(大概…)
比如书中第一章中对伊东桑长相的描述…


呃,稍微回想一下………


哦呀这就是传说中的帅气眼神。
(自截第一季第六话,好吧我是故意的 :3)


还有酒席上的描述以及伊东被杀之前的情况。


对比一下… (自截第一季第十话)


近藤桑有劳你倒酒,真是幸苦了…


这个故事告诉我们,
在夜黑风高的晚上喝醉了酒一个人边走边唱歌真的很危险。




说了那么多,乘着大家还高兴的时候,我想说…
楼主今天一整天都有事,今晚交不出货……… Orz
原谅我吧明天一定更!

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-22 21:31:00 +0800 CST  
【Toudou's Route IV】
【藤堂线(四)】


My feedback afterward...
之后,我对菓子的反馈…


Well, truthfully, it was all delicious. I don't think I helped very much as I couldn't come up with any way they could improve on it.
老实说,所有的菓子都非常美味。我真的无法想到任何有建设性的评价,自认为帮助不大。


But I made sure to be honest, and they seemed pleased with my response.
但是,我确保将内心的真实想法告诉店员,他们看起来十分满意。


So I guess I succeeded at my mission...?
那么这个托付于我的任务算是成功了…?


**走出店门**


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Wasn't everything delicious?"
{雪村千鹤}“所有菓子都非常美味,是不是?


”{Toudou Heisuke}
"Yeah! I don't get to eat food that pretty very often. It was amazing."
{藤堂平助}
“是啊!平时很少有机会能吃到那么漂亮的菓子呢,感觉太棒了。”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"But when you heard someone from the Satsuma might be there, you got so jumpy and upset."
{雪村千鹤}
“但是,当听说萨摩藩的人可能会在这里出现时,你简直像变了个人似的,不安分地上蹦下跳。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Hey now! I already apologised for overreacting!"
{藤堂平助}
“喂喂喂!打住打住,我已经给大家道歉了嘛!”
(害羞的单纯少年~)




{Yukimura Chizuru}"He he..."
{雪村千鹤}
“嘿嘿…”


(特别CG登场~~~)






{Toudou Heisuke}
"Chizuru."
{藤堂平助}
“千鹤。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Yes?"
{雪村千鹤}
“嗯?”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Did you have a good time today?"
{藤堂平助}
“今天你玩得开心吗?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I know it was just an errand for Kondou, but I did have fun. I got to eat so many delicious sweets."
{雪村千鹤}
“虽然只不过是近藤先生派给我们的任务,但我确实很开心很享受。今天可是有幸吃了很多菓子呢。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Right. I have fun, too!"
{藤堂平助}
“没错。今天我也很开心啊!”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Ah, but we were on an errand..."
{雪村千鹤}
“啊,可是我们是在执行任务呢…”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Eh, that's totally fine. I mean, how often do you get to step outside aside from rounds? And enjoy yourself?"
{藤堂平助}
“欸,其实没有关系啊。我是说,除了能在巡逻时跟着我们,平时你哪有机会自由自在地跑出来享受一番啊?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Yes, but... I do feel a little guilty."
{雪村千鹤}
“是啊,不过…你说得让我现在有那么一丝罪恶感啦。”


{Toudou Heisuke}
"Don't worry! I had a really great time with you, too!Come on, we should start heading back!"
{藤堂平助}
“不用在意!今天能和你在一起,我真的很开心!快点,是时候我们应该要回去了!”






{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Okay!"
{雪村千鹤}
“好的!”


I was glad to hear that Heisuke enjoyed himself.
我默默地为平助君能有像今天这样的好心情而感到高兴。


I'd noticed he seemed down from time to time recently, so I hoped that today cheered him up some.
前段日子,我时不时地注意到他的心情似乎有些低落,但愿今天的茶道会能让他稍微舒心一点吧。


We proceeded to walk toward headquarters, talking comfortably the whole way.
回屯所的路上,我们愉快地边走边聊。


There was no way I could've known the meaning behind Heisuke's smile, or what would happen to him later...
而在那个时候,我还并不能理解平助君笑容背后的含义,也不能预料到即将发生在他身上的一系列事…






<THE END>
藤堂线完结撒花~
☆*:.。. \(^o^)/ .。.:*☆
整体来说,这段线还是很欢乐的。平助虽然年龄比千鹤大但偶尔却像个小孩子一样天真活泼!(要不然怎么是小天使嘛)但是作为乙女游戏太像兄妹篇了嘻嘻...
明天就开始原田和冲田共线啦!叫“田田线”怎么样?;3
好肉麻啊鸡皮疙瘩掉一地但这两位的故事真的很甜喔~

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-23 13:40:00 +0800 CST  
接下来我就来小小解释一下为什么这个欢快的平助线却以悲伤的情绪结尾。

(没错楼主没忘记解释这个…)

有些吧友可能一开始就注意到了(刚买游戏时我是先玩的特别篇,之后玩主线时才发现两者有那么点联系…),茶道会发生在【1867年二月】,这个日期代表着什么呢?

在平助线末尾提到的“心情低落”其实指的就是在庆应三年初,平助对未来的迷茫——究竟是继续呆在一开始加入的新选组,还是应该跟随自己的心,与伊东甲子太郎一派参加御陵卫士。
这段故事无论是看过动漫还是玩过游戏的孩子应该都很熟悉我就不一一复述了。(昨天刚提到关于伊东桑的吐槽…对不住…)
也许在茶道会的时候,小一就已经得知自己将会成为间谍的任务,而平助也渐渐下定了脱离新选组的决心。

1867年三月(庆应三年三月,茶道会发生后一个月),平助与小一在樱花盛开的季节离开了新选组。虽然两人目的不同,但特别篇故事末尾所留下的忧伤情绪为日后两件事埋下伏笔:小一因为间谍任务成功,离开新选组一段时间为躲避风头;而伤重的平助为了生存,被迫喝下变若水成为罗刹。(即千鹤所说“即将发生在他身上的一系列事”)

当然,真实历史比起动漫来说要残酷得多。史料记载,藤堂平助在油小路事件当晚腹背受敌身受数十处重伤,就这样结束了自己短暂的一生。当时的他看到的是新选组的崛起,一般农民子弟成为武士的希望。估计所有人都没有料到,仅仅一年之后,新选组也因时代的变迁而灰飞烟灭。
平助并没有看到这一切。像一位真正的武士一样战死沙场,对他而言也算是另一种解脱吧。

气氛突然变得太凝重…
我还是抱着一个乙女游戏玩家的轻松心情继续更下去吧… 滚去读《血风录》寻找吐槽…
P.S. 这两张游戏图真的好美…
(^ ▽ ^)

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-23 20:01:00 +0800 CST  
吐槽二度目!!!
这次书又转回新选组刚来到京都的时候了。




1. 确实在薄樱鬼里,近藤桑一般都叫土方“阿岁”(とし,Toshi)


2. “漫长青春岁月”…“紧密的情谊”…
作者你确定这不是言情小说中才会用到的句子?!(¬_¬)
自截第三季第一话~~~




还是想感叹一句... 星空好美~两个人的情谊更美~(你够了!)


3. 平时看书速度很快,一不小心看见鬼之副长“年方二八”…(自戳双眼)


4. 黄线勾出的人物,大家都认识的。于是动漫组做出了这张图:


但是,制作过程中一不小心出现了BUG…
啊诺... 井上桑你跑哪去啦?还有那个乱入的龙之介是怎么回事?!
于是才有了副长的这一幕:




5.书中描绘的那名男子…是谁呢?怎么样的特殊情感呢?(为什么今天都满满的Gay味)
篇幅很长那么就愉快地决定留到明天吧!^^


既然等一会儿还有冲田和原田线… 再来多加点料...


1. “别看他”概括了芹泽桑确实很威严。(乱入)
2. 原田桑居然来自盛产鲜鱼的地方!(爱吃鱼的我突然感到很高兴…)
3. 土方桑用“小伙子”称呼总司… “疼爱”…是怎么个疼爱法?这样?


4. 天生大舌头… Orz


今天就这样,无力吐槽了。
下午来更翻译... ( ̄ε ̄*)

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-24 10:09:00 +0800 CST  
【Okita and Harada's Common Route I】
【冲田和原田共线(上)】

接三楼【茶道会共线】



I wonder where I should go.
1. Kitchen (Harada and Okita's Route)
我想知道接下来应该去哪。
1. 厨房(田田线)


Lunch may be getting prepared right now.
现在应该是准备午餐的时间。


Maybe they might need my help with something.
也许他们需要我的协助吧。


----------


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Hey, the ones that go in the miso soup... Do you think the size is good?"
{原田左之助}
“欸,你看看这些味增汤的佐料…大小切得合适吗?”


{Okita Souji}
"The hell if I know. They all end up the same in your stomach so why does it matter?"
{冲田总司}
“鬼才知道呢。反正最后进到肚子里都会混在一起的,切的大小有关系吗?”
(总司你的黑暗料理大家都知道…)




{Harada Sanosuke}
"Wow, way to put some effort in...Well, maybe this is fine then."
{原田左之助}
“哇,你拜托用点心好不好…嗯,算了就切成这样吧。”
(你还说总司呢,左之助也放弃治疗了吗?!)




(这时,总司直接将一大把材料丢进了锅里…


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Hey, wait Souji! I think that's too big. You probably can't cook it all the way through like that."
{原田左之助}
“喂,等等总司!这几块实在是太大啦。直接放进去根本就煮不熟啊。”




I poked my head into the kitchen and found Okita and Harada talking.
当我把头探进厨房时,冲田先生和原田先生正在讲话。


It looked like they were in charge of lunch today.
看来,今天的午餐是由他们负责。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Um..."
{雪村千鹤}
“呃…”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Oh, hey Chizuru! What're you doing here? Did you want something?"
{原田左之助}
“哦,嘿千鹤!你在这里干什么呢?有什么需要吗?”
(呵呵,一秒变温柔...)




{Okita Souji}
"Are you hungry? Did you come looking for something to eat?That sounds like something Shinpachi would do, not you."
{冲田总司}
“你这孩子是饿了吧?想到厨房里找点东西吃?唉呀,这听起来真不像你,像是新八才会干的事嘛。”
(新八躺枪… (¬_¬))




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Ah, no, I just came to see if you needed any help."
{雪村千鹤}
“啊,不是,我只是来看看有什么我能帮忙的。”


{Okita Souji}
"Oh. Well, sorry but we're good here."
{冲田总司}
“喔,让你失望了,我们两位在这里做得好着呢。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Hold up. If we leave it to you, Souji, we'll be lucky if anything survives to be edible.
You come at the perfect time, Chizuru. Would you mind giving us a hand?"
{原田左之助}
“欸等等!拜托啦总司,如果把所有的菜都丢给你来料理,勉强能够入口都算是运气好了。
千鹤你来得正是时候。过来帮帮忙怎么样?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Of course! I'd be happy to."
{雪村千鹤}
“当然可以,我非常乐意。”


{Okita Souji}
"Fine. Do what you want."
{冲田总司}
“随你便吧,爱干啥干啥。”


He released the knife he was holding onto the cutting board, his face set into a frown.
冲田先生皱皱眉头,把菜刀放在了砧板上。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"W-Well, I'll start making the stew."
{雪村千鹤}
“好-好吧,我来炖汤。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Great. Thanks."
{原田左之助}
“太好了。谢谢。”
(纯粹想截一张左之助帅气的单独照而已。)




I picked up the knife Okita left on the table and began cutting the vegetable.
我拿起冲田先生放下的菜刀开始切菜。


There didn't seem to be anything else for him to do, so Okita sat down and left the cooking to us.
看起来没有其他事可以做,冲田先生便坐了下来,将料理的任务交给我和原田先生。
(嘟起来的幽怨小嘴~)




The vegetables in the pot were simmering.
锅里的菜噗噗地冒出热气。


The flavouring was all set to go, so all that was left was to wait for the food in the pot to finish.
香料都已经备齐,就等锅里的食物煮开了。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"It just needs a little more time to simmer and then we'll be done."
{雪村千鹤}
“现在只需要多煮一会儿就完成啦。”


{Okita Souji}
"Man, you're quick. You are way more useful here than me."
{冲田总司}
“哦呀,手脚真麻利。比起我来说你在这里发挥的用处比较大呢。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"You plan on sitting on your ass there the whole time, Souji? You could at least cook the rice."
{原田左之助}
“总司,你准备屁股粘在板凳上一直晃悠下去吗?!至少过来帮忙煮一下饭吧。”


{Okita Souji}
"Well, it wasn't like I was doing nothing earlier. She helped herself to my job."
{冲田总司}
“哼,早些时候我又不是没有帮忙。她把我的工作全都抢走啦。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Oh... I'm sorry."
{雪村千鹤}
“噢…真是很抱歉。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Don't worry about it. If we'd left it to him, the result may have not been edible."
{原田左之助}
“担心什么,不用管那个家伙。要真的把做饭的任务交给他,能不能吃都是个问题。”


Just then, I heard the door slide open.
就在这时,我听见厨房的门开了。




<未完待续>
“田田线”开始!(还是感觉好肉麻啊)
呃,这回我就不用解释下面哪位会出场了吧… ╮(╯3╰)╭
温柔的左之助和腹黑的总司谁才是大家的菜呢?嘻嘻明天见~

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-24 16:22:00 +0800 CST  

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发表时间:2015-04-15 01:55:00 +0800 CST

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