【翻译】薄樱鬼手机英文版特别故事Tea Ceremony Event

米娜周末快乐!
很抱歉楼主之前犯了个小小的失误。
二楼原本说平助之后应该先翻译冲田线,今天晚上码共线时才发现原田线应该先走……… Orz
做个调查,大家说我应该先翻译哪个呢?

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-24 20:34:00 +0800 CST  
【Harada and Okita's Common Route II】
【原田和冲田共线(下)】

{Kondou Isami}
"Ah, Yukimura, here you are. I was just looking for you."
{近藤勇}
“啊,雪村君,原来你在这里。我正想找你呢。”
(局长大人二次登场!\(^O^))




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Do you need something?"
{雪村千鹤}
“您有什么需要吗?”


{Kondou Isami}
"I do. And if I can ask either Souji or Harada too, that'd be great."
{近藤勇}
“嗯,如果能叫上总司或者原田帮忙就更好了。”


{Okita Souji}
"Go ahead, I have a free moment right now."
{冲田总司}
“您有什么要求尽管说,反正我现在闲的很。”
(喂喂喂孩子你不是应该在做饭么...)




{Harada Sanosuke}
"Lies. You just passed all the work over to her. Anyway, what did you need Kondou?"
{原田左之助}
“撒谎不打草稿的家伙,你刚刚把所有的工作都丢给她了!不管怎样…近藤先生您有什么事啊。”
(左之的这个表情好无奈啊)




{Kondou Isami}
"Oh, that's right! Yukimura, I have a favour to ask you."
{近藤勇}
“哦,那好!雪村君,我有件事想拜托你。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Of me?"
{雪村千鹤}
“拜托我?”


{Kondou Isami}
"Yeah. You know that big snack shop at the corner of Shijo and Karasuma?"
{近藤勇}
“没错,你知道位于四条和乌丸拐角处之间的那家很大的和菓子店吗?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Yes."
{雪村千鹤}
“知道。”


I still wasn't that familiar with Kyoto, but I did remember the large store that sold snacks there.
我对京都还不是非常熟悉,但我确实记得那里有这样的一家和菓子店。


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Hey, isn't that where I arrested that ronin who started a fight? I remember there was a big commotion outside.
{原田左之助}
“嘿,我曾经在那抓过一个闹事的浪人吧?当时造成的骚乱可真大啊。”


{Kondou Isami}
"Yeah. They bring us sweets every once in a while, or take me out to dinner, as a sign of thanks.
I was just invited by the owner to sample their newest treat. They're holding a tea ceremony to get the public's feedback.
I've been told the new confection was made with female customers in mind."
{近藤勇}
“是啊。为了表示感谢,他们经常隔三差五地送来些菓子或者请我吃晚餐呢。
刚刚接到店主的邀请,他希望我能前去品尝店内的最新产品。他们准备策划一场茶道会,以此征集群众意见。
这一季的菓子据说是为女性顾客量身定做的喔。”


{Okita Souji}
"I get it. That's why you came to her."
{冲田总司}
“我懂啦,所以您就来找她了。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Me?"
{雪村千鹤}
“找我?”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"If it's geared toward women, then it's best to get an opinion from one."
{原田左之助}
“如果是以女性顾客为目标,那么最好的方法便是请女性来进行评价了。”


{Kondou Isami}
"How about it, Yukimura?Although they're serving tea, it's not supposed to be very formal. All you have to do is eat the treat and be honest."
{近藤勇}
“雪村君,你觉得呢?虽然会有茶道表演,但也不是什么正式场合。你只需要好好品尝菓子,诚实地告诉他们你的意见就行了。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Sure. If my opinion can be of any help..."
{雪村千鹤}
“当然可以,如果我的意见能发挥一些作用…”


{Kondou Isami}
"So you'll do it? Great! Thanks. I owe you one!"
{近藤勇}
“那么就说定啦?太好了!非常感谢,这次就算是我欠你的!”


{Okita Souji}
"Well, good for you. You can actually be useful for once. You're a girl."
{冲田总司}
“唉呀真好啊。因为是女孩子,你终于派上点用场了。”
(嘻嘻吃醋了!)




{Harada Sanosuke}
"Cut it out, Souji."
{原田左之助}
“你给我闭嘴,总司。”
(发火了发火了!(╬▼皿▼))




{Okita Souji}
"I just..."
{冲田总司}
“我只不过…”
(无奈的小眼神┳_┳)




He turned his head to the side and frowned.
他皱起眉头,把头转向一边。


It seemed like Okita wasn't happy that Kondou came to me for a favour instead of him.
看来,因为近藤先生是来找我而不是找他去办事,冲田先生在闹别扭。


{Kondou Isami}
"Well, that's not all of it. It turns out I can't go after all.I was hoping Souji or Harada could take my place... What do you guys think?"
{近藤勇}
“事情是这样的,一些公务上的问题让我一时半会实在是脱不开身。因此我希望总司或者原田能替代我参加茶道会…你们觉得呢?”




{Okita Souji}
"Oh, well if it's standing in for you, I'll do it. Besides, it might be interesting with her there."
{冲田总司}
“哦,如果是代表近藤先生,我可是非常乐意呢。况且,如果单独和她一起参加,肯定会非常有趣吧。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Geez. I know it's only feedback at a tea ceremony, but you are representing Kondou. Don't take it too lightly."
{原田左之助}
“呃。虽然只是给菓子提出点建议,但你需要代表近藤先生呢。不能小看这次任务啊。”


{Okita Souji}
"Oh? Are you not pleased I'm going, Sano?"
{冲田总司}
“哦?对于我做代表参加,左之你有意见吗?”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Ah, not exactly. Are you able to form an educated opinion of sweets?"
{原田左之助}
“啊,并不是这样。你能够提出一些有见解的反馈吗?”


{Okita Souji}
"I can leave that to her, right? I'm just taking her there. Or did you want to go?"
{冲田总司}
“可以把这些问题交给她嘛,不是吗?我只不过是陪她去而已。还是,左之你想带她去?”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Well... If it's just escorting her, I can do it..."
{原田左之助}
“那个…如果只是一路护送她,我当然可以做啊…”


{Kondou Isami}
"It doesn't matter to me who goes so long as you say hello to the owner for me while you're there.
Hmm... Who do you think would be good to take, Yukimura?"
{近藤勇}
“无论你们两人谁去对我来说都可以,帮忙跟店主打个招呼就行了。
嗯…雪村君,你觉得应该和谁一起去?”


It appeared as if Kondou was going to leave it up to me to decide.
看来近藤先生把这一次的选择权交给我了。


Maybe…
1. Harada ✅
2. Okita
也许和…
1. 原田 ✅
2. 冲田




<未完待续>
既然没有人回答我的问题...(好伤心啊嘤嘤嘤
我自作主张地还是按顺序来翻了。
明天开始原田线!喜欢总司的小伙伴请等一等,喜欢副长和少爷的小伙伴请多等一等吧。

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-25 17:14:00 +0800 CST  
【Harada's Route I】
【原田线(一)】


Maybe…
1. Harada
也许和…
1. 原田


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Um..."
{雪村千鹤}
“呃…”


Harada protected them during the incident before, so they might be happy to see him again.
既然原田先生曾经保护过那家店,如果能再次看到他,店长应该会非常高兴吧。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"If it was Harada who helped them before, then maybe he'd be a good choice."
{雪村千鹤}
“原田先生曾经帮助过那家菓子店,和他一起去应该是个很好的选择。”


{Kondou Isami}
"An excellent point! If he goes, they'll definitely be pleased."
{近藤勇}
“说的没错!如果他能参加的话,店长一定会很乐意接待的。”




{Okita Souji}
"Well, if that's how it is, then he can go ahead."
{冲田总司}
“哼,如果你们都这么说,那就让他去吧。”
(这个眼神太凶狠了…总司消消气马上就走你的线,( ̄ε ̄*) 乖~)




{Harada Sanosuke}
"Hey now. You know I'm not the type to go to these things. I don't even know the etiquette."
{原田左之助}
“喂,大家都清楚我不适合参加那种活动,我连基本的茶道会规矩都不知道。”




{Kondou Isami}
"Ah, well neither do I. But you don't have to worry about that part."Leave the feedback to Yukimura."
{近藤勇}
“啊,其实我也不知道啊,但你不用担心这些。评价菓子就交给雪村君来完成吧。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"I see. Then... Good luck, Chizuru."
{原田左之助}
“我明白了。那么…祝你好运啦,千鹤。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I'll do my best!"
{雪村千鹤}
“我一定会做到最好!”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Ha ha. Don't get too excited now."
{原田左之助}
“哈哈,不要现在就那么兴奋啊。”


And that's how Harada and I ended up being the ones to go to the tea ceremony.
就这样,大家最终决定让原田先生和我一起参加茶道会。


----------


The next day.
第二天。


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Hey are you ready, Chizuru?"
{原田左之助}
“你准备好了吗,千鹤?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Okay."
{雪村千鹤}
“好啦。”


{Kondou Isami}
"Might be a good idea to warn you to be careful they don't find out you're a girl.
Make sure you take care of her, Harada!"
{近藤勇}
“我还是想再次提醒一下,千万不要被他们发现你是个女生啊。
原田,一定要好好照顾她!”


Kondou saw us off as we left headquarters.
近藤先生目送我们走出屯所。


I travelled along the main Kyoto road many times with Harada, but it felt different today for some reason.
与原田先生一起走在京都的主干道上,感觉与往常有些不一样。


Usually it was for rounds, or he would help me on an errand.
一般上都是与大家一起出来巡逻,或者他陪我到某些地方打点差事。


But it was rare to see us walking along, just the two of us.
但是,现在只有我们两人走在一起,这种情况还是很少见的。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Um... I wonder what this tea ceremony will be like?"
{雪村千鹤}
“嗯…你说这个茶道会究竟会是什么样的呢?”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"No idea. I don't know much myself. Kondou said they just want your opinion on the sweets, right?So I guess you just eat it, then tell them if you liked it or not."
{原田左之助}
“不知道啊。对这方面我真的一点也不了解。近藤先生说他们只需要你的反馈是吧?我想应该就是吃吃菓子,然后告诉他们你喜不喜欢。”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"But it's supposed to be a new confection... Maybe they want something more than that."
{雪村千鹤}
“但这次提供的菓子都将是当季的新产品啊…也许他们想要的回复不止是简单的喜好吧…”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Heh. That's why your feedback is so important. I expect the best from you."
{原田左之助}
“呵,这就是为什么你的反馈是那么的重要了。我对你可是有着很高的期望喔。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"O-Okay."
{雪村千鹤}
“好-好吧。”


My feedback, huh...
我的反馈啊…


I didn't know what to expect from the ceremony. Because I was representing Kondou, I couldn't help but feel nervous.
我不知道接下来会发生什么。因为代表近藤先生的缘故,我不由得有些紧张。


I had to do it right.
我一定要做好。


The owner welcomed us to his store himself.
店长居然亲自出来迎接我们。


When he'd heard that Harada was coming in place of Kondou, he was beside himself with excitement.
当他知道代表近藤先生出席茶道会的人居然是原田先生时,他显得非常兴奋。


For his part, Harada didn't know what to do with the attention, so he hurried us along to the room for the tea ceremony.
然而,一旁的原田先生看起来并不知道该如何大方地应对店长对他的热情。他显得十分焦虑,再三催促我们应尽快进入店内参加茶道会。


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Man, I'm kind of embarrassed. I only did what I thought was necessary back then. He's too grateful."
{原田左之助}
“天哪,刚才我真是尴尬极了。在那时我只不过做了一件我认为是正确的事,他们居然对此这么感恩。”
(受女人欢迎的左之不会应对店长应该是意料之中吧…嘻嘻)




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"But he did seem really pleased to see you."
{雪村千鹤}
“但店长见到你时真的很高兴啊。”


We kept our voices low as we made our way down the hallway and passed other rooms.
沿着走廊经过其他客人的房间时,我们自觉地将谈话声放低了。


<未完待续>
耶,好男人原田的部分也开始了,一共分为四小节~
如果说小一和平助线的甜分和焦糖咖啡差不多,甜中带点微苦,那么这条线完全就是在往嘴里塞糖了…
难道真的和传说中说的一样,左之才是亲儿子吗… <( ̄) ̄)>

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-26 15:01:00 +0800 CST  
【Harada's Route II】
【原田线(二)】


A few groups of customers were already inside, and they were all conversing comfortably with each other.
店内,早已有几组人坐在一起谈天说地了。


I'd expected it to be a rather formal setting as it was a tea ceremony, but I was pleasantly surprised.
我以为茶道会即将很正式地进行,没想到整个房内弥漫着轻松的气氛。


I feel a little relieved...
我松了一口气…


Many of them were women. Perhaps that was because they were who the store was attempting to target.
店内也有许多女生,可能是因为当季的菓子是以女性顾客为目标吧。


I caught myself staring at all of the exquisite kimonos.
我的目光不知不觉地被她们身上华美精致的和服所吸引。


My steps must have slowed as my focus drifted.
估计是注意力转移的缘故,我的脚步慢了下来。


{Harada Sanosuke}
"What is it? Something happen?"


{原田左之助}
“怎么了?发生什么事了吗?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"No... I was just admiring how beautiful everyone looks..."


{雪村千鹤}
“不…我只不过在欣赏,你看,场内所有的人都好漂亮啊。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Ah, yeah, sorry. It's a fancy ceremony and you are dressed like this. I wish you could wear a beautiful kimono like them."
{原田左之助}
“啊,没错,真对不起。这明明是一场美好的宴会,而你却被迫穿成这个样子。我真希望你能像她们一样穿着漂亮的和服。”
(突然想到大家第一次看千鹤穿和服时那么羞涩的样子…✪‿✪)


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"O-Oh, that's not what I..."
{雪村千鹤}
“哦-噢,不是这样的…”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Well, walking down the street might be hard if you dressed up like that.
The guys would be all over you."
{原田左之助}
“不过,如果真是那样,估计这一路我们都会有麻烦了。
所有的男人都会目不转睛地盯着你呢。”
(原田桑那样正好就可以英雄救美嘛~




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"N-No, it wouldn't be like that..."
{雪村千鹤}
“不-不是,不会变成那个样子的…”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Heh... I don't think you've noticed, but you're actually..."
{原田左之助}
“欸… 你可能对此没怎么注意,但其实你…”


**店员桑突然冒出来**


{Store Employee}
"And here you are."
{店员}
“原来你们在这儿。”
(捣乱的的店员桑!楼主猜左之想说千鹤很漂亮?大家说呢?)


{Harada Sanosuke}
"... This must be the place. Let's go in."
{原田左之助}
“…看来就是这里了。我们进去吧。”




He smiled and stepped inside.
他边笑边走进房间。


What was he about to say? I was curious, but I didn't think now was the time to find out.
他刚才想说些什么呢?我很好奇,但我知道现在不是问那些话的时候。


I hurried after him and entered the room.
我连忙跟着他走进房内。


On the middle of the table was a plate full of sweets.
桌上摆满了一盘盘的和菓子。


The colourful variety was so beautiful. I felt a little bad that we'd have to eat them.
菓子的颜色各异,摆放起来却十分漂亮。我不禁感到一丝罪恶感,有点舍不得吃下那些菓子。


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Ah. These are really impressive. They're almost too pretty to eat."
{原田左之助}
“啊。真是惊人呐。漂亮得都不知道该如何下手了。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I was just thinking that as well."
{雪村千鹤}
“和我想的一样呢。”


{Store Employee}
"Please go ahead."
{店员}
“客人请随意品尝。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Don't mind if I do."
{原田左之助}
“那么我就不客气了。”


Harada picked up one of the sweets and popped it into his mouth whole.
原田先生拿起一个菓子直接丢进嘴里。


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Damn. This is delicious! What about this one? Hmm... This one's good too!"
{原田左之助}
“哇该死。真是太好吃了!那么这个菓子的味道又怎么样?嗯…这个也很好吃!”


Harada was eagerly devouring them, and the employee looked immensely happy.
看着原田先生狼吞虎咽地吃着菓子,店员看起来十分高兴。


{Harada Sanosuke}
"This cherry blossom one is also good! Huh... I'm not really offering up much of an impression am I?"
{原田左之助}
“哇这个樱花菓子也很好吃啊!呃…我好像没说出什么令人印象深刻的评语吧?”
(你的评语最深刻的就是:好吃好吃真好吃!╮(╯▽╰)╭)


{Store Employee}
"Oh, not at all! It's good to see you diving into it.We are honoured that you enjoy it that much"
{店员}
“噢,没事!看来您非常喜欢本店的菓子,我们对此感到十分荣幸。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Ha ha... That's kind of you, but it's still not good feedback. What do you think, Chizuru?"
{原田左之助}
“哈哈… 非常感谢,但我并没有提供任何帮助啊。千鹤,你觉得这些菓子怎样?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Um..."
{雪村千鹤}
“呃…”


<未完待续>
千鹤现在就是你大展拳脚的时候啦,近藤桑的任务不要忘了哟~
左之又会做出什么令人ドキドキ的举动呢…
敬请期待!"o(>ω< )o"

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-27 21:00:00 +0800 CST  
楼主终于滚来更新了...今天一天累成狗写得眼睛要瞎了...
谢谢54楼@静雨觞的提醒,52楼”一盘盘“确实应该翻成”满满一盘“~
特此更正!楼主下次会更加注意的~

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-28 20:18:00 +0800 CST  
【Harada's Route III】
【原田线(三)】


I decided to try the sweet in the shape of a cherry blossom.
我决定品尝一下面前樱花形状的菓子。


Exactly as Harada had said, it was truly delicious.
就跟原田先生说的一样,果然非常好吃。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"It's so soft. The bean paste isn't too sweet, which makes the whole treat delicious."
{雪村千鹤}
“这个菓子非常软,豆馅也不至于甜得发腻,真的很美味。”


{Store Employee}
"Thank you very much."
{店员}
“非常感谢。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"And..."
{雪村千鹤}
“而且…”


I felt as if I should add something other than it tasted good.
我觉得仅仅评价菓子的味道不能说明什么。


If I came to the store as customer, the first thing I'd likely look at would be colour and shape.
如果我是顾客,菓子的颜色与形状一定会是首先吸引我的两大要素。


If something pretty like this was arranged artfully, I'd definitely stop to see...
像这么漂亮的菓子,如果店员能够稍用心思排列一番,我一定会想在店外停下脚步看看。


{Harada Sanosuke}
"What is it?"
{原田左之助}
“怎么了?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Oh, I'm sorry! I was simply thinking to myself what would draw my eye if I was a customer buying sweets..."
{雪村千鹤}
“噢,不好意思!我正在假设如果自己身为顾客,什么样的菓子才能吸引我的注意力…”


{Store Employee}
"And what did you decide?"
{店员}
“比如说?”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Well, I noticed you have cherry blossoms and morning glories, it might be nice to have flowers for each seasons.
Those two are for spring and summer, and there's chrysanthemum for fall. What about a Camilla or Daffodil for winter? "
{雪村千鹤}
“我注意到店内的菓子有樱花和朝颜形状,分别代表春季与夏季,而那边的菊花菓子则代表秋季。
如果能制作所有四季的菓子,比如加上代表冬天的山茶花和水仙,效果就更好了。”


{Store Employee}
"Ah... That's a good idea. We'd have to consider colour and shapes, but we may be able to come up with something.
Thank you so much for all your help. Please, stay and enjoy yourselves for as long as you wish."


{店员}
“啊…这确实是个好主意。我们不仅应该考虑形状,还可以增加一些新款式。
非常感谢您的帮助,接下来请慢慢享用!”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Wow, a real woman's opinion is something."
{原田左之助}
“哇,来自女人的想法果然就是不一样。”
(这个色!迷!迷!的眼神!不过我好喜欢...




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Well... I'm here representing Kondou and the Shinsengumi. I wanted to do things right..."
{雪村千鹤}
“既然来这里是代表近藤先生和新选组,我就想一定要把这份工作做好。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Ha ha ha. You don't have to get so worked up. Just enjoy the treats."
{原田左之助}
“哈哈哈,不需要那么激动,好好享受店主的款待吧。”




Harada patted me on the head.
原田先生轻轻拍了下我的头。
(亚撒西~~~)


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Come on, we have all of these amazing sweets. Let's finish them off."
{原田左之助}
“来,面前有那么多美味的菓子,一起消灭它们!”


He picked up one of the remaining sweets and ate it.
他拿起其中一个剩下的菓子,一口吞了。


He had a point. They were set out for us, so we may as well.
他说的没错。既然是为我们准备的,那就不用客气了。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"These are so good!"
{雪村千鹤}
“这些菓子真好吃啊!”


The delectably sweet taste of red beans exploded in my mouth.
又甜又美味的红豆馅菓子唇齿留香。


I still felt bad eating them because they were so cute, but they were too tempting to resist... I couldn't stop.
看着那些可爱的菓子,我还是有点不忍心吃下它们。但我已经停不下来了,根本无法抵挡眼前的诱惑…
(千鹤馋的样子还真无法想象2333…)


After a while, I slowly realised that Harada was staring at me.
过了一会儿,我才慢慢发觉到原田先生正目不转睛地看着我。


Huh...? I'd been so focused on the food... Did I do something inappropriate?
哈…?我的注意力一直是在菓子上…难道我做了什么不得体的举动?


He stopped eating and leaned over, his hands reaching toward me...
原田先生不仅没吃菓子,反而向我靠近,将手伸了过来…
(好危险的举动喔...)




<未完待续>
一开始准备更完CG片段的,但是今天因为校乐团比赛,一大早帮学弟学妹打杂去啦,(免费搬运工 Orz)
现在才刚回家有点头昏眼花…
虽然篇幅很短但俺可是和乐器一起挤在后台忍受杂音坐在地上(你是有多狼狈)完成这一切的只能翻这么多了…大家就凑合着看看吧…
一会儿就来更吐槽啦,明天奉上CG~我真是个好人(误)!!!
还是想说一句,学姐只能帮到这里了~祝乐团好运吧… \(^o^)/

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-28 20:28:00 +0800 CST  
吐槽三度目!!!


上回说到一位和土方副长有着特殊情感(误)的男人,就是这位啦:


芹泽:“慢死了,这么晚才让我出场…”




1.那些骇人听闻的逸闻…不过以芹泽桑的性格,那些事我相信他还是做得出来的…
2.刚开始看第三季因为不了解历史,以为“鸭”这个名字是动漫组故意取的。(想到伊东鸭太郎,呃扯远了…)原来芹泽桑是想流行一下啊。可是…那!么!多!单名为什么非要取名叫“鸭”?!
3.发现一个更好的全员图~大家都到齐了!(截自第三季片头然后自己拼的。不过山南桑被字幕遮住了,副长是一脸嫌弃地看着龙之介,小一连看都不想看一眼…预计度娘会吞像素)






4.总司原来喜欢八卦。但是说梦话的芹泽桑感觉好萌啊,“柴鱼片”,“金平糖”什么的… 我饿了…
5.据统计,单单在这一章节,总司的八卦居然让副长说了三次“无聊”。但土方桑你一开始还不是听得津津有味!



6.阿梅确有其人。总司依旧八卦。副长更是不解风情。


7. 芹泽桑居然怕追债到那个程度…不过阿梅也不是省油的灯… “我明天再来!”平间也只能是一脸苦相。






9.咦,好像看到什么奇怪的东西。副长你是有多狼狈…(扶额)




10.到了现代,终于有了助于大家理解总司的词汇:腹黑(萌属性)


截图过程中,发现了一直很想吐槽的部分…(截自第一季第十一话)


龙之介的绘画功底实在是太好了!但是,薄樱鬼的米娜,你们知道纸上的新见跟你们是一个画风吗?!(认真工作的小一好帅




吐槽部分好长,还算不错吧~~~~感谢@BB_20010707的提醒! 楼主一早带着《血风录》在麦当劳和回来的地铁上完成的!
耶今日任务终于结束了~滚去码字明天照样按时更!

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-28 20:54:00 +0800 CST  
更新来喂各路夜猫子~ 喵...(=゚ω゚)ノ



【Harada's Route IV】
【原田线(四)】


(一上来就是特别CG登场~)




{Harada Sanosuke}
"Hold on, let me..."
{原田左之助}
“等等,让我…”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I-Is something wrong?"
{雪村千鹤}
“有-有什么问题吗?”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"You were so wrapped up in the sweets I think you failed to notice you have red bean paste on your mouth."
{原田左之助}
“注意力一直集中在菓子上,你一点儿也没察觉到有红豆馅黏在嘴边呢。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"P-Paste?! Oh, that's okay! I-"
{雪村千鹤}
“豆-豆馅?!噢,没事!我-”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"I'll take care of it, so stay still. It'll ruin the cuteness."
{原田左之助}
“交给我来处理吧,你只要保持不动就行,不然这可爱的样子可就毁了。”
(原田是护花型,而少爷呢:“ 你那盛装打扮的美丽样子,就由我亲手使之凌乱吧!”2333... 咳,扯远了)


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Cute... Um, you mean the sweets, right?"
{雪村千鹤}
“可爱…呃,你指的是这些菓子,对吗?”
(千鹤…你是真的不知道左之指的是你吗...


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Um... Well, I did just say you were representing Kondou, right? Come. Look this way."
{原田左之助}
“呃… 我刚才说过你现在代表近藤先生,是吧?来,看这里。”
(左之居然想把话题撇开,答非所问啊…




He took ahold of my chin and my heart stuttered in my chest.
他抬起了我的下巴,我的心不禁剧烈跳动。


Softly, gently his finger wiped at my mouth.
他开始用手指轻柔地擦拭着我的嘴唇。


I... Must have had paste all over... How embarrassing...
我…一定满嘴都是红豆馅吧…这是多么尴尬的事啊…


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"U-Um... I'm sorry. And... Thank you.
It was no wonder you were staring. You should have just told me..."
{雪村千鹤}
“呃-嗯…真是对不起。然后…谢谢你原田先生。
难怪刚才一直在盯着我,你应该早点提醒一下的…”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Well, I did, but you seemed so absorbed."
{原田左之助}
“一开始我提醒你了,可是你一直全神贯注在菓子上。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I didn't notice at all... And, um... Could we not bring it up again? I'm so embarrassed."
{雪村千鹤}
“我一直都没有注意…而且,呃…能够不要再提起这件事了吗?真的好尴尬。”


I wasn't able to even look at him as I spoke.
说话时因为害羞,我无法直视着他的脸。
----------
A short while later, the employee returned to let me know my feedback was informative and to thank us for coming.
不一会儿,店员告诉我刚才的反馈对菓子店帮助很大,非常感谢我们的到来。




I'd been anxious since I had to represent both Kondou and the Shinsengumi, but I suppose I'd been helpful.
由于要代表近藤先生和新选组,我感到有些焦虑,但至少今天我还是发挥了作用吧。
----------
Harada and I headed back the way we came just as the sky was darkening.
走在回屯所的路上,天色渐渐变暗。


{Harada Sanosuke}
"I have to say I thought the tea ceremony would be stuffy, but we got good sweets instead. It was a nice way to relax abit."
{原田左之助}
“我以为会是一个古板的茶道会,没想到吃了那么多菓子。真是个放松的好机会啊。”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I think so too. They were all so tasty."
{雪村千鹤}
“嗯,那些菓子都很好吃。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"I'm really glad you were there to give your feedback. Only thing I could say was they were delicious."
{原田左之助}
“你能提出一些有见解的反馈真令我高兴呢。不像我,只能说些菓子真好吃之类的话。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I was so nervous, thinking what I said had to represent Kondou as well..."
{雪村千鹤}
“刚才真的很紧张,一想到还要代表近藤先生…”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"If you were so jittery, were you able to enjoy yourself at all?"
{原田左之助}
“居然那么战战兢兢啊,你有好好享受一番吗?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Oh, don't worry. I had a wonderful time."
{雪村千鹤}
“哦,没事不用担心。今天过得很愉快喔。”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Ah, that's right. You were really into it."
{原田左之助}
“啊,确实是呢。一直乐在其中啊。”
(意味深长的笑容…)




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"H-Hey...!"
{雪村千鹤}
“呃-嘿…!”


{Harada Sanosuke}
"Ha ha... Sorry, sorry. We agreed. Didn't we? I'll be sure to treat you to some delicious dango sometime as an apology.
I'd really like it if, when that time comes, you could be this happy."
{原田左之助}“哈哈…抱歉抱歉。我们已经说好了不再提起这件事,是吧?作为道歉,哪天有空我们一起去吃团子怎样?
我真希望到了那天,你还能够像今天一样这么快乐。”




Harada placed his large hand on my shoulder.
原田先生将他的大手搭在我的肩膀上。


The action caused us to move nearer to each other, and it only reminded me of what he did earlier.
My heart pounded in my ears.
这个动作不由得将我们两人之间的距离缩短,让我一下子回想起刚才他在菓子店的举动。
自己的心跳声轰隆隆地回响在耳畔。


So much had happened today, but I was glad I came.
今天虽然发生了很多事,但我还是很高兴能够参加茶道会。


I guess I was able to run an errand for Kondou...
至少我也能帮近藤先生办事了。


But... There was no way I could've anticipated that moment... When Harada wiped the paste off my lips...
不过…我根本就没有预料到会发生这样的小插曲…原田先生居然用手拭去我嘴边的红豆馅…
(思想开始暴走╮(╯▽╰)╭)


I couldn't meet his eyes the entire trip back to headquarters.
于是,回屯所的这一路上我都不敢直视他的眼睛。




<THE END>
原田线完结撒花~
☆*:.。. \(^o^)/ .。.:*☆
这部分打得我起鸡皮疙瘩,终于圆满结束了~ 原田线的CG真是一本满足!不过在场的其他客人,你们看到两个“男人”做出这种举动不会感到很怪吗…(假设大家都看不出来千鹤是女的情况下…)这动作真的好犯规啊呼呼~~~ ( ̄ε ̄*)
明天就走冲田线啦,小恶魔总司又会做些什么呢,敬请期待吧~
好孩子楼主坚持不落下一天!!!

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-04-29 23:38:00 +0800 CST  
【Okita's Route II】
【冲田线(二)】

A few groups of customers were already inside, and they were all conversing comfortably with each other.
店内,早已有几组人坐在一起谈天说地了。




Many of them were women. Perhaps that was because they were who the store was attempting to target.
当季的菓子是以女性顾客为目标的,因此在场也有许多女生。
My eye couldn't help but be drawn to all of the flashy kimonos.
我不知不觉地被她们身上华美精致的和服所吸引。


{Okita Souji}
"You know, if we'd known we were going to come here, we should've dressed you up as a girl.
It would've been nice to have a cute girl by my side."
{冲田总司}
“早知道我们会来参加这样盛大的活动,真应该让你换上女装啊。
有个可爱的女孩子在我身边一定感觉不错吧。”
(总司你又在闹!不过我也想看千鹤酱穿女装...)




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"C-Cute..."
{雪村千鹤}
“可-可爱…”


My face heated up in a furious blush as Okita's statement caught me by surprise.
冲田先生的话不禁让我吃了一惊,我的脸感到一阵阵地发烫。


{Okita Souji}
"Well, we'd only know if it'd be cute if you dressed up, I guess."
{冲田总司}
“不过我想,你是不是真的可爱还是要换了衣服才看得出来呢。”


{Store Employee}
"This way, please."
{店员}
“客官这边请。”


We were guided to a table covered in a variety of colourful confections.
我们被带到一张方几前,上面摆满了色彩鲜艳的各类蜜饯。




{Store Employee}
"I'll bring the next treat out shortly, so please enjoy these for now."
{店员}
“请稍等片刻,我将尽快把其他菓子端过来。”


The employee bowed politely and disappeared.
店员向我们微微鞠躬后,便离开了。


I glanced around the room. We were here to give our feedback, but it didn't seem like anyone had to make a speech.
我环视整个房间。虽然店长想征求我们对菓子的反馈,但顾客并不需要公开发表自己的看法。


Everyone was relaxing at their own tables, eating the sweets, and speaking casually to the employee.
在桌前品尝完菓子后,他们都分别将个人意见私下告诉了店员。


I felt a little relieved. I'd expected it to be a lot more serious and uptight.
我突然觉得松了口气。来之前还以为这将会是一个严肃紧张的茶道会,看来并非如此嘛。


{Okita Souji}
"Not gonna eat any, Chizuru?"
{冲田总司}
“小千鹤,你不想吃一点吗?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Ah, I'll have some now."
{雪村千鹤}
“啊,我马上就来尝尝。”


I reached for one, but my hand halted in mid-air.
The sweets were in the shape of flowers, and looked too beautiful to touch.
我的手向桌上的菓子伸去,却不由自主地停在了半空中。
那些菓子被制作成各式各样的花朵形状,实在是美得让人不忍心触碰。


Okita didn't seem to care, popping one whole into his mouth.
反观冲田先生,他随手拿起一个菓子便直接丢进了嘴里,看起来毫不在意。


{Okita Souji}
"Oh, it looks lovely and tastes good, too."
{冲田总司}
“哦呀,它们既有卖相又有吃相啊。”


He kept eating them, one after another. He looked like he was enjoying them so much, I couldn't help but smile.
冲田先生开始一个接一个地吃起菓子,陶醉在其中的样子让我忍不住笑了起来。


{Okita Souji}
"What? What is it?"
{冲田总司}
“怎么了?有什么好笑的?”
(很喜欢这个嘟嘴颜啊...)




<未完待续>
总司确实是个爱吃糖的孩子呢,来来来,我拿金平糖喂你~
今天这部分甜份比较少,不过确实好希望千鹤能穿女装参加茶道会啊,这样不就更有乐趣了吗… (喂)


当然还是要说一句:庆祝帖子成功申精~ *\(^o^)/* (撒花)

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-01 21:40:00 +0800 CST  
【Okita's Route III】
【冲田线(三)】


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Nothing. The treats are like flowers, and looked too pretty to me to tear up.But watching you, maybe that's the wrong attitude..."
{雪村千鹤}
“没什么,只是我实在不忍心拆开花朵形菓子精致的包装。
看看你大快朵颐胡吃海塞的模样,真是可惜了这么漂亮的菓子。”


{Okita Souji}
"It's probably more of a waste to not eat it, it's delicious."
{冲田总司}
“不吃这些好看又美味的菓子才真是浪费呢。”
(作为一个爱吃零食的人我很赞同这点...)




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"He he he. You must really like sweets, Okita.Have you always liked them?"
{雪村千鹤}
“呵呵,冲田先生你一定很喜欢甜点吧。从小就是这样吗?”


{Okita Souji}
"Hm, I wonder. Why do you want to know?"
{冲田总司}
“哼,你为什么想知道这些呢?”
(傲娇总司2333


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I was just curious."
{雪村千鹤}
“我只是好奇嘛。”


{Okita Souji}
"Hmm... I don't remember when I started.
It's not the first time, but back when we were at Mibu, Yagi gave all of us manju.
I don't think I've had anything that delicious since I came to Kyoto."
{冲田总司}
“嗯… 我不记得是什么时候开始有这个喜好的。
过去在壬生村的时候,八木先生曾经给过我们馒头。
虽然不是第一次吃馒头,但自从到京都后就再也没吃过那么美味的东西了。”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"So you like manju?"
{雪村千鹤}
“所以你喜欢馒头?”


{Okita Souji}
"Well, it's not like it's my favourite or anything.
Hey, I've been fielding a lot of questions here. Why do you ask so much?
Is it... Because you're interested in me?"
{冲田总司}
“其实,也并不是最喜欢的东西啦。
嘿,突然问我这么多问题干嘛?
难道…你对我有兴趣?”
wwwwwww~~~)




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I... I didn't mean it like that. I'm simply curious, that's all."
{雪村千鹤}
“我…我不是这个意思。只是好奇而已,就这样。”


{Okita Souji}
"Ah... So you're curious about me."
{冲田总司}
“啊…原来是对我感到好奇啊。”



{Yukimura Chizuru}
"W-Well, if you put it that way, it sounds abit suspicious..."
{雪村千鹤}
“呃-嗯, 如果你非要这么理解的话,听起来会让人误会的…”


He stared at me intently, but I couldn't hold his gaze and turned my back to him.
他心无旁骛地看着我,令我实在无法招架他的目光,只得背过身去。


True, I'd peppered him with a lot of questions, but it wasn't as if I was interested in him...
确实,我刚才向他提了许多问题,但这并不代表我对他有意思啊…


{Okita Souji}
"Ah, whatever.
Anyway, you're supposed to be forming an opinion here yet you haven't eaten any of them."
{冲田总司}
“嘛,无所谓啦。
算了,今天你是来店内评价菓子的,可是到现在还一口没动呢。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Huh?"
{雪村千鹤}
“哈?”


{Okita Souji}
"Go on. take a bite."
{冲田总司}
“来来来,尝一口。”
(喂我喂我~啊...




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Oh, uh... Okay..."
{雪村千鹤}
“噢,呃…好吧…”


I bit into one and was suddenly assaulted with a soft, sweet sensation on my tongue.
我轻轻地咬了一口菓子,那柔软,甜滋滋的味道真是口齿留香。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"It's so good..."
{雪村千鹤}
“好好吃啊…”


I swallowed it quickly and continued grabbing more.
I could only think my earlier idea was completely wrong.
我飞快地吞下菓子,马上又拿起一个。
这让我不禁觉得,一开始的想法真是太愚蠢了。
(吃才是王道!!!


The delicious taste engulfed me and spread throughout my mouth.
菓子的滋味迅速地弥漫了整个口腔,将我的味觉吞噬。


<未完待续>
啦啦啦我来更新了!总司的特别CG明天奉上喔~ (☆_☆)
今天和小伙伴去吃抹茶冰,算是一个迷你茶会吧~



楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-02 22:17:00 +0800 CST  
楼主今天有点事,于是会更得很晚… 各位要早睡的学生党对不住了…五一劳动节就是要劳动的啊 Orz

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-03 22:01:00 +0800 CST  
我妈要断网了………
看来只能明天更文,今天就先Po下特别CG给大家解解馋吧…实在对不起…

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-03 23:49:00 +0800 CST  
【Okita's Route IV】
【冲田线(四)】






Suddenly I realised Okita was watching me.
忽然,我意识到冲田先生正看着我。


His head tipped to the side, he was openly staring.
他的头偏向一边,毫无忌惮地将目光锁定在我身上。
(大庭广众之下喂


Self conscious all of a sudden, I looked away.
我顿时感到有些不自在,把脸转向一旁。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Wh-What is it...?"
{雪村千鹤}
“怎-怎么了…?”


{Okita Souji}
"Just thinking how you're really enjoying it.
I mean, I get it. We never get to eat something this nice back at headquarters."
{冲田总司}
“只是看看你享受菓子的样子嘛。
确实啊,在屯所我们根本就吃不到这么美味的东西。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Well, yes. But..."
{雪村千鹤}
“嗯,是啊。但是…”


{Okita Souji}
"But I didn't expect you to get so engrossed in it.
Don't hold back. Eat. Would you like some of mine, too?"
{冲田总司}
“但是我没料到你会这么全神贯注在吃上面。
不要抑制自己的冲动,继续吧。要不我把我的菓子分一点给你?”
(分给我一点啊我也想吃~~~




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Um, no. I've had enough."
{雪村千鹤}
“呃,没关系。我吃得够多了。”


{Okita Souji}
"Aw, done already? It was fun watching you eat so energetically.
Plus you were all 'It'd all be a waste to tear them up' and here you are, devouring them."
{冲田总司}
“噢,这就饱了?看着你吃得这么尽兴的模样真是有趣啊。
一开始还说着'拆开包装真是可惜了',可是现在呢,你却吃得一点儿也不剩。”


*whimper*
I had no rebuttal to that.
*呜*
我确实无法为自己辩解。


{Okita Souji}
"But really, it looks like it's all mouthwateringly delicious to you.
I think you should be the one giving their feedback, instead of me. So when they come around later, you speak of them."
{冲田总司}
“说实话,这些菓子看起来真的令你垂涎欲滴呢。
等一下店员过来了你就告诉他们你对菓子的看法啊。你才应该是给予反馈的人。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Just me?"
{雪村千鹤}
“只是我而已吗?”


{Okita Souji}
"Uh huh. You'll be representing the whole of the Shinsengumi, so do it right. Ha ha ha."
{冲田总司}
“当然啦,你来这里是代表新选组嘛,一定不要讲错话喔,哈哈哈。”
(总司完全就是推卸责任嘛,果子爱好者居然不评论2333
总司:闭嘴,要不我砍了你喔!


Afterward, I offered up my opinion on the sweets.
之后,我将个人对菓子的意见告知了店员。




I just told them what I really thought.
我道出了所有的真实想法。


But they seemed to be happy with what I said.
他们看起来也对此十分满意。


So I suppose everything went well...?
所以这个任务已经顺利地结束了…?


When the sun began to set, Okita and I headed back home.
太阳快落山了,我和冲田先生准备走回屯所。


{Okita Souji}
"What did you think of today?"
{冲田总司}
“今天过得怎么样啊?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I was kind of nervous... But it was a lot of fun eating such delicious sweets."
{雪村千鹤}
“一开始我真的很紧张…但是能吃到那么美味的菓子还是挺开心的。”


{Okita Souji}
"Ah, good. Sometimes it's nice to take a break.
Well, technically it was an errand this time."
{冲田总司}
“啊,太好了。有时候确实要好好放松一下。
不过,今天参加茶道会并不是放松,而是队务呢。”


Our shadows stretched long and thin in front of us as we walked toward headquarters.
回去的路上,我们两人的影子在前方不断地被夕阳拉长。


Three years have passed since we came to Kyoto, and I still hadn't found my father.
来到京都已经三年了,但我还是没能找到父亲。


I spent every day so desperately searching for some kind of clue...
Maybe today was a good break.
每天每时,我都在拼命地收集任何关于他下落的线索…
也许今天休息一下也不算是件坏事吧。
(就在我以为故事将会在此结束的时候...)


{Okita Souji}
*Cough*
{冲田总司}
“咳咳。”
(编剧你要干什么!!!




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Okita?"
{雪村千鹤}
“冲田先生?”


{Okita Souji}
"What? What is it?"
{冲田总司}
“怎么了?有什么事吗?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Um... Are you all right?"
{雪村千鹤}
“呃…你还好吧?”


{Okita Souji}
"What? Everything's fine."
{冲田总司}
“什么嘛?一切如常啊。”
(总司君你又这样...




I had nothing to say to that, so I quietly nodded.
Okita, who insisted nothing was wrong, smiled.
由于不知道该说些什么,我只好默默地点了点头。
而冲田先生呢,却一直坚称自己什么事都没有,微微地笑了。


<THE END>
冲田线完结撒花~
☆*:.。. \(^o^)/ .。.:*☆
如果按照前面的推断,这个时候队员们还未体检,大家看总司病殃殃的样子还以为只是稍感风寒…
只能感叹一句:天妒英才。
唉…明明是很甜很甜的一段故事,但不知不觉地突然变虐了。(;´༎ຶД༎ຶ`)
于是抱着很复杂的心情更完了这条线。

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-04 14:23:00 +0800 CST  
吐槽四度目!!!


今天的篇幅大部分都将与山崎君有关! 山崎粉请看过来~~~ ↖( ̄▽ ̄")


呃…没错你们不用感到惊讶…


山崎君作为早期加入的新选组成员,在历史上是非常活跃的,立下了许多汗马功劳。
为了任务,他不仅做忍者,探子,还扮演过乞丐,药商等角色。
一直觉得这张图好帅的~~~


算是第二个在《薄樱鬼》中让我流泪的人吧,(第一个是源先生…)在船上垂死挣扎的时候,几乎完全控制不了自己,直接泪崩。


毕竟这里是一个充满欢乐气息的楼,悲伤情绪还是点到为止比较好…


估计动漫组为了突出可攻略角色(毕竟针对乙女),许多其他人物的故事出现了大幅度删减,因此山崎出现的部分也不是很多。我就在这里补充一些有意思的山崎片段给大家看看(莫名想到了“冈崎片段”,理科生你们明白我的痛吗?!)。




1.我们的忍者山崎君几乎就和薄樱鬼中描绘的一样,一个好胜心强的美男子~
2.山崎确实在动漫中没怎么笑过。(弱弱地问一句,他有笑过吗?!)
3.原来近藤先生喜欢乡下气息的人啊。(进一步证明了山南和伊东桑是很有才华的2333)
“山崎老弟”这是个多么有爱的称呼啊!
4.“连命都可以不要”又把我虐了一下…嗷…




5.这个图看起来是没什么好吐槽的,因为全是事实啊。
但!是!在薄樱鬼第三季中山崎君是在芹泽被杀之前入队的…
喔,难怪暗杀芹泽的时候他没出现呢…(真相了O_O)




6.书中还介绍了山崎君的家庭背景,由于篇幅太长,感兴趣的吧友请自行搜索其他部分…
但也正是因为他的背景,山崎在道场里一直遭受到别人的白眼………




7.最后一段描写的是他终于在池田屋杀死了一直瞧不起他的忠兵卫(有些家仇怨恨),觉得那句“无从明白他的心境”有种莫名的心酸。(怎么又虐了!)
8. 还是发生在池田屋。
近藤桑问总司这样的问题完全就是没事找事,给自己心里添堵嘛…
“晶莹剔透的皓齿”居然让我脑补出了总司代言牙膏广告… Orz


插一句书中记载,当时冲进池田屋的五人分别是近藤,冲田,藤堂,永仓和近藤桑的养子周平。




(截自第一季第二话,然后自己拼的!)
果然养子不是制作组亲生,黑到看不见脸是要闹怎样啊……
而且,几乎所有话少没台词的人都是清一色月代头!!!
这里充分体现出了乙女游戏的特点:节目组只会掏钱给主角和攻略角色染烫洗剪吹…


今天吐槽部分就这样了!突发状况,楼主这两天要去一个没有网络的地方,因此土方和风间共线预计要到星期三才能来更,实在是对不住了...(当然如果运气好找得到Wi-Fi我还是会更的...)
还请大家继续关注!

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-04 18:19:00 +0800 CST  
楼主终于回家啦~~~
过去一天没有稳定网络,无法看到留言并及时回复,还请大家谅解…
现在这么晚都应该睡了吧…
土方和风间共线就快码完,吐槽第五弹也准备好材料了,明天就来更!
米娜晚安,我去睡觉补补元气……

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-06 22:56:00 +0800 CST  
楼主终于回家啦~~~
过去一天没有稳定网络,无法看到留言并及时回复,还请大家谅解…
现在这么晚都应该睡了吧…
土方和风间共线就快码完,吐槽第五弹也准备好材料了,明天就来更!
米娜晚安,我去睡觉补补元气……

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-06 22:58:00 +0800 CST  
【Hijikata and Kazama's Common Route I】
【土方和风间共线(上)】


接三楼【茶道会共线】


I wonder where I should go.
3. Hijikata's room (Hijikata and Kazama's route)
我想知道接下来应该去哪。
3. 土方先生的房间(土方和风间线)


He might need to speak to me, so maybe I'll go there.
也许土方先生会有事找我,我还是去他的房间看看吧。


*千鹤来到房门外*


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Excuse me."
{雪村千鹤}
“对不起,打扰一下。”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Hm? Chizuru? You need something?"
{土方岁三}
“嗯?千鹤?找我有事吗?”





{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I don't seem to have anything to do right now, so I wondered if you needed help."
{雪村千鹤}
“我现在已经没有什么事情可以做了,您有什么需要我帮忙的吗?”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Enter..."
{土方岁三}
“进来吧…”


I slid the door open and stepped inside, Hijikata was seated behind his desk, writing.
轻轻推开门后我踏进了他的房间,土方先生正坐在桌前,写些什么东西。


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"If there's nothing pressing, you can relax in your room. No need to run around constantly busy.
So why did you come?"
{土方岁三}
“如果没有什么紧急事务需要处理,你可以到房间去休息了。不需要跑来跑去非要找些事来做。
所以说,你来这里想干什么呢?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Well, I am your page after all..."
{雪村千鹤}
“再怎么说,我也是您的侍童吧…”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Ugh."
{土方岁三}
“呃。”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"If you don't need me, I'll check to see if the kitchen needs help.I think they might be preparing for lunch soon.
{雪村千鹤}
“如果您现在没有什么需求,我可以去厨房看看能不能帮忙。估计他们已经在准备午餐了。”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Really. You can just rest in your room."
{土方岁三}
“我是说真的,你可以直接回房间休息。”


He suddenly paused as if he remembered something.
他停了下来,好像突然想起些什么。


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Ah... I saw Souji and Harada on their way to the kitchen.
If Souji's in charge of the meal, it might be wise to check. His food may be barely edible."
{土方岁三}
“啊…刚才我看到总司和原田去了厨房。
如果是由总司负责今天的午餐,去查看一下才是明智的选择吧。他做的料理几乎都不能吃。”
(这个深思熟虑的表情后紧接着的冒冷汗...副长你是有多不信任总司做的菜...





{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Th-Then I'll head there to help them..."
{雪村千鹤}
“那-那么我就去厨房给他们帮忙吧…”


A small noise, nearly silent, alerted us to someone outside the room.
一声微弱的轻响传来,提醒我们有人正在土方先生门外。


{Kondou Isami}
"Toshi, you in?"
{近藤勇}
“阿岁,你在里面吗?”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Y-Yes. It's fine. Enter."
{土方岁三}
“我-我在。没关系,您进来吧。”




<未完待续>
我回来了!过去两天网络状况不好,我连图片都看不到只能签到了… 有些吧友的评论我也是昨天晚上才收到,回复晚真的是很抱歉… 土方和风间共线也开始了,虽然更得很晚,还是请大家继续关注唷~

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-07 22:46:00 +0800 CST  
【Hijikata and Kazama's Common Route II】
【土方和风间共线(下)】

{Kondou Isami}
"Oh, you're here too, Yukimura? This is perfect. I was looking for you as well."
{近藤勇}
“噢,雪村君你也在这儿啊?太好了。我也正想找你呢。”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Both of us? Did something happen?"
{土方岁三}
“找我们俩?有什么紧急情况吗?”
(近藤桑这样的笑脸好慈祥啊...




{Kondou Isami}
"Ah, well, it's not that important. I just had a favour I wanted to ask of you two."
{近藤勇}
“啊,其实也并不怎么要紧。只是想让你们帮我办一件事。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Me too?"
{雪村千鹤}
“也需要我吗?”


{Kondou Isami}
"Yeah. You know that big snack shop at the corner of Shijo and Karasuma?"
{近藤勇}
“没错,你知道位于四条和乌丸拐角处之间的那家很大的和菓子店不?”
(同样的句子,这是第三遍...)




{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Didn't Harada make an arrest there? Some ronin being difficult?"
{土方岁三}
“原田好像曾经在那儿抓获一位闹事的浪人吧?”


{Kondou Isami}
"Yeah. They bring us sweets every once in a while, or take me out to dinner, as a sign of thanks.
I was just invited by the owner to sample their newest treat. They're holding a tea ceremony to get the public's feedback.
The event is tomorrow, but I have a meeting scheduled with the Aizu at the same time."
{近藤勇}
“是啊。为了表示感谢,他们经常隔三差五地送来些菓子或者请我吃晚餐呢。
刚刚接到店长的邀请,他们准备策划一场茶道会来征集群众意见,希望我也能前去品尝最新产品。
茶道会就在明天,然而真不凑巧啊,我早就已经与会津藩约好在那时举行会面了。”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"That's clearly your priority.
Cancel with the store. It's just a damned tea ceremony in the end."
{土方岁三}
“会津藩那儿的会面才是你应该优先考虑的事吧。
只是一个该死的茶道会而已,和店长通融一下,这次就不去了。”
(其实副长这里的语言有点不雅...




{Kondou Isami}
"True, but they're always going out of their way for us. I gave them my word. I can't disrespect them like that."
{近藤勇}
“我同意,但是他们也为我们付出了很多。我已经向店长许下了诺言,不能反悔啊,要不然就太失礼了。”




{Hijikata Toshizo}
"You're too nice. This is how you get stuck in other people's problems."
{土方岁三}
“就是因为你在其他人眼里是一位老好人,所以一直都被别人的问题困扰着。”


{Kondou Isami}
"Ha ha ha. You're too strict, Toshi."
{近藤勇}
“哈哈哈。阿岁,是你太苛刻了。”
(我赞同近藤桑的观点!土方:


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"So, you're sending someone in your place... Why do you need her there as well?"
{土方岁三}
“所以,你想找一个人代替你去茶道会是吧…那么找她又是为什么?”




{Kondou Isami}
"I've been told the new confection was made with female customers in mind. That's why I'd love it if Yukimura could go."
{近藤勇}
“这一季的菓子据说是为女性顾客量身定做的。所以我想,如果雪村君能参加那就太好了。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"M-Me?"
{雪村千鹤}
“要-要我去?”


{Kondou Isami}
"Yes. I feel that a woman would know best about what women like. You're the perfect choice.
How about it, Yukimura?
Although they're serving tea, it's not supposed to be very formal. All you have to do is eat the treat and be honest."
{近藤勇}
“嗯。我觉得只有女性会了解其他女性的喜好吧,你就是我们最好的选择了。
怎么样雪村君,你愿意吗?
虽然会有茶道表演,但也并不是非常正式,你只需要品尝菓子,老实说出你的意见就行了。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Sure. If my opinion can be of any help."
{雪村千鹤}
“当然可以。如果能帮得上忙我就去。”


{Kondou Isami}
"So you'll do it? Great! Thanks. I owe you one!
Speaking of, Toshi..."
{近藤勇}
“那么就说定了?太好了!非常感谢,这次就算是我欠你的!
说到这里,阿岁…”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Don't tell me..."
{土方岁三}
“你该不会…”


{Kondou Isami}
"Ha! Sharp as ever. Now I don't have to explain as much. I want you to go in my place."
{近藤勇}
“哈!你还是那么料事如神嘛。看来我就不用解释那么多了,我希望你能代替我参加。“


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"We can't let her wander off on her own, I suppose. And she clearly can't represent us."
{土方岁三}
“我就知道你会这么说。不能让她一个人去,而且她也没有资格代表新选组。”




{Kondou Isami}
"Of course, if you can't go, we simply have to find a replacement to take her instead...
Would someone else be better? What do you think, Yukimura?"
{近藤勇}
“那是当然,不过如果你不能参加,我再找一位能带她一起去的队员也是可以的…
和别人一起去是不是更好呢?雪村君,你怎么看?”


It appeared as if Kondou was going to leave it up to me to decide.
看来近藤先生把这一次的选择权交给我了。


Maybe...
1. Hijikata is the commander☑️
2.Someone who knows sweets
也许和…
1.新选组副长土方先生☑️
2.一位更了解菓子的队员




<未完待续>
接下来就是土方线了~
与鬼之副长的茶道会之旅又会有什么新鲜事等着大家呢… 请拭目以待吧~

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-08 22:48:00 +0800 CST  
吐槽君第五次发威~

今天的材料取自于《鸭川钱取桥》一章,讲的是{武田观柳斋}的故事。

(富有喜感的伊东桑再次乱入…


“喂,他是谁来着?!
”呃…大多数吧友熟悉的新选组组长只有六个人而已,武田呢,其实是薄樱鬼中未提到的五番组组长。
一番组:冲田 总司 Okita Souji
二番组:永仓 新八 Nagakura Shinpachi
三番组:斋藤 一 Saitou Hajime
四番组:松原 忠司 Matsubara Tadaji
五番组:武田 观柳斋 Takeda Kanryuusai
六番组:井上 源三郎 Inoue Genzaburou
七番组:谷 三十郎 Tani Sanjyuurou
八番组:藤堂 平助 Toudou Heisuke
九番组:三木 三郎 Suzuki Mikisaburou
十番组:原田 左之助 Harada Sanosuke

“那么,他关这个吐槽什么事啊?”
由于武田与萨摩藩有所接触,最终在竹田大道被小一取了性命。
而关于他叛变的情报呢,则来自于土方派出的探子:山崎。
所以,今天的吐槽这几个人都会出现喔!当然关武田的事啦~


为了加强理解,先容我粗略道来整个事情经过(说白了就是土方桑下的很大的一盘棋):
某位新选组五番组队员A被杀,土方让山崎调查这件事;
山崎找到A的情人,情人搞不清状况有点混乱就说嫌犯有萨摩口音(其实跟萨摩没关系);
山崎因此报告土方:凶手是萨摩派来的;
土方让山崎调查A的组长也就是武田,但武田自大又很不耐烦;
情人又找上门来,说是经过武田她才认识了A;
山崎问土方该怎么办,副长心生一计来试探武田的忠诚度(此时他心里已经开始不信任武田了);
土方派山崎找来一个生性胆小的五番组队员B,让他监视武田的行踪,看看是否与萨摩有来往;
B藏不住“监视武田”这么大的秘密,心虚怕事就说了出去,其他队员跟着瞎掺和,传着传着整件事就变成:“武田已经叛变萨摩了”;
山崎这才明白土方找B的用意,对副长的敬佩又加深了一成;
武田被流言吓得半死。于是乎为了保命,心一横投靠萨摩叛变了…叛变了…变了…了… _(:3」∠)


(此处省略一万字)
武田在小一刀下结束了悲(zuò)惨(sǐ)的一生。


从这个简陋的大纲中,总结出以下五条生活小贴士:
一. 情人永远是不可靠的。一定要爱老婆,爱家庭,爱生活。
二.不耐烦又喜欢自吹自擂的家伙没有人会喜欢。武田一直就是这样,因此山崎和其他人都很讨厌他。
(咦,谁是其他人?)
三.工作时千万别惹到上司。
(尤其像是土方桑:疑心病很重,随便砍一两个眼睛都不眨的那种…
土方:你不想活了?!)
四.最可怕的不是猪一样的对手,而是猪一样的队友。
(但现实生活中如果真的遇到像B一样队友…Music!“祝你平安啊祝你平安…”)
五.身正心正不怕事。
(武田其实不搭理流言就什么事都没有了,非要趟背叛组织那趟浑水哎哟喂)


好了,还是将吐槽内容转到书上。


1.图一和二充分展示了:有成果之前和有成果之后老板对待员工的态度。
2.让年糕考得漂亮… 土方桑貌似有OCD(强迫症)?


3.(请自动忽略一下在场的近藤,山南和源先生)
弱弱问一句,将刚烤好的年糕放在膝盖上,山崎你不会觉得烫吗?就算不烫,年糕难道不会脏么…




4.光是看到这些名字就知道…武田你马上要华丽丽地死翘翘了。


(截自剧场版《京都乱舞》,请叫我截图拼图小能手~
平助当时还在江户因此请换下新八唧自动脑补…)




5.死之前还是要痛快地喝一把,武田醉了;想象被一群新选组的美男子围在中间喝酒,我也是醉了。
6.近藤桑的“你送他回萨摩藩邸”其实就等于告诉斋藤“我要你送他去死”…
7.斋藤微微一笑2333…不寻常的举动代表着不寻常的后果。
(小一:我喝酒时基本上从来不笑的。)


8.两个人都不要灯笼那么便是开打的前奏呢。
走着走着,武田和小一终于来到了竹田大道。


之后,作为临时工的武田从吐槽君那儿领了便当和薪水开开心心地回家去了。
其他人继续留在楼主这里,等待他们下次出场的机会。

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-09 17:55:00 +0800 CST  
【Hijikata's Route I】
【土方线(一)】


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"They do a lot for us, and if the person needs to stand in for you, then Hijikata as Commander would be the best."
{雪村千鹤}
“既然店家为我们付出了许多,那么作为副长的土方先生应该是代替近藤先生出席的最好人选了。”


{Kondou Isami}
"Precisely. The woman has spoken. Do you think you can do it, Toshi?"
{近藤勇}
“就是因为这样我才来找你嘛。阿岁,连这位小姐都发话了,你能办得到吗?”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"You always do this. Ask in a way I can't say no."
{土方岁三}
“你一直都是这样,以一个让我无法拒绝的口吻叫我去办事。”




{Kondou Isami}
"Please, Toshi. They've been so kind. And I did gave my word."
{近藤勇}
“拜托了,阿岁。他们对新选组那么友善,而且我都已经答应店长了。”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Damn it. Fine. I'll go."
{土方岁三}
“啊啊,真该死,行行行我去。”


{Kondou Isami}
"Thank you! And you too, Yukimura."
{近藤勇}
“那么就谢谢你和雪村君啦。”
(土方桑的表情亮了




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Of course! I'll do my best to meet your expectations!"
{雪村千鹤}
“嗯!我一定不会辜负您的期望并达到要求的!”


And so it ended up that Hijikata and I were to go to the store's tea ceremony.
就这样,大家最终决定让土方先生和我一起参加茶道会。


----------


The next day.
第二天。


Hijikata and I left the headquarters after lunch.
午饭过后,我和土方先生离开了屯所。


We took the main Kyoto road.
我们走在京都的主干道上。


It was rare to walk with Hijikata when we weren't out on rounds, so I was a little nervous.
除了出来巡逻,几乎很少有机会能和土方先生走在一起,我有些忐忑不安。


He was slightly ahead of me, so I found myself staring at his back.
他走的速度有点快,于是我只能在后面默默地看着他的背影。


I think he was working right up until we left.
好像在我们离开屯所之前,他都一直在处理队务。


Was it really okay for me to ask him to take Kondou's place?
让他代替近藤先生参加茶道会,我这么做是对的吗?


If only there was something I could do to help...
如果我能够帮到一些忙的话…


I glanced up and suddenly realised I'd started to lag behind. The distance between us had grown.
我抬眼一瞥,发现自己已经远远落后了。我们之间的距离正在逐渐增加。


I hurried to catch up.
我连忙追赶上去。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Sorry."
{雪村千鹤}
“抱歉。”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"..."
{土方岁三}
“…”
(土方桑你走太快了啊...回想第一篇斋藤线,还是小一比较温柔╮(╯▽╰)╭)




His eyes darted over to me, briefly, before he looked forward again and continued walking.
他飞快地扫视了我一眼后,便将视线聚焦到前方,再次迈开了脚步。


Maybe I shouldn't have asked him to go...
也许我不该叫他来的…


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Hm, what exactly happens at a tea ceremony?"
{雪村千鹤}
“呃,土方先生,茶道会究竟是什么样的啊?”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"No idea."
{土方岁三}
“不知道。”




The words were low and clipped. He must be in a bad mood.
声音低沉,话语简略。看来他现在的心情果然非常差。


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"I'm really sorry..."
{雪村千鹤}
“真的很对不起…”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"Hm? What for?"
{土方岁三}
“嗯?为何这么说?”




{Yukimura Chizuru}
"Um... I knew you were busy, but I still asked you to come with me."
{雪村千鹤}
“呃…我知道您最近十分忙碌,但是我居然罔顾队务,让您陪我出来参加茶道会。”


{Hijikata Toshizo}
"It was Kondou's idea. Would've ended up the same even without you.
Anyway, we should hurry if we want to get there on time."
{土方岁三}
“那是近藤先生的主意,就算你不那么说,他也会逼我去的。
总之,我们现在应该加紧步伐,要不然就要迟到了。”


{Yukimura Chizuru}
"O-Okay."
{雪村千鹤}
“好-好的。”


And with that, Hijikata increased his pace.
话音刚落,土方先生走路的速度又快了许多。


His stride was so long, I had to jog to keep up.
他一步的跨度非常大,我必须要小步慢跑才能跟上。


We were so focused on getting to our destination that we ended up not speaking much.
由于当时只想快点赶到目的地,一路上我们几乎没有作任何交流。




<未完待续>
土方线今天开张,同样也会分成四个部分~
副长啊,你要我说些什么呢,千鹤酱对你这么好你还是那么淡漠…… _(:3」∠)
(千鹤:爱得好幸苦!T^T
楼主:来来,摸摸头…)
前天是母亲节出去吃饭,昨天和朋友去嗨水果姐的演唱会,楼主手机没有配网,于是乎两天没更也没回复留言对不住啦........

楼主 Tazawa樣  发布于 2015-05-12 18:24:00 +0800 CST  

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