【UESP】剑歌者

前几天在翻吧里有没剑歌者的资料
很遗憾的发现并没有多少
于是在下斗胆以自己那点低的可怕的翻译水平
从UESP的词条里开始翻译
希望能够造福更多人
【我会在每段翻译后把原文带上】



楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-13 21:31:00 +0800 CST  
剑歌者是一群追寻“剑之道”的Yokudan战士。
而剑之道是一种以掌握自己的剑为宗旨战斗哲学。
剑歌者们有着无比强大的剑术,亦拥有可以与其强大剑术相匹敌的魔法力量,这是因为他们同时追寻身体与心灵的强大。
尽管剑歌者的传统起源于Yokudan,但它在第一纪元时被Ra Gada带到了对岸的泰姆瑞尔
在到达泰姆瑞尔大陆后,剑歌者们迅速的在落锤省站稳了脚跟,并率领Yokudan人民建立起了新的家园。
在历史上最强大的剑歌者是Frandar Hunding。他的光辉事迹在许多世纪后仍然被红卫人们所传唱。

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-13 21:38:00 +0800 CST  
【对应原文】
Sword-singers were an order of Yokudan warriors who followed the "Way of the Sword", a martial philosophy on blade mastery.[1] Singers were capable of astonishing feats of swordsmanship, and were viewed by some to be as much mages as warriors. They sought strength of body, and of mind.[2] Although the tradition of sword-singing originated in Yokuda, it was brought to the shores of Tamriel by the Ra Gada in the First Era. The sword-singers were instrumental in claiming the entire province of Hammerfell and establishing a new homeland for the Yokudan people. The most accomplished sword-singer in history was Frandar Hunding, whose writings on the subject were revered by the Redguards centuries later.[1]

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-13 21:39:00 +0800 CST  
【背景资料〈1〉】
古代Yokudan人曾是工匠 诗人 法师和学者。
【这里的法师在原文是mystics,神秘学者,我不知如何翻译,故大胆翻译为法师】
但持续的内战不断困扰着整个国家
而这导致了许多人开始寻求以剑为道,获得属于自己的开悟,这些人也就是剑歌者的前身
这最终发展成了一种被称为“咏剑”的武道传统
他们使用以魔法打造的强大利剑
不仅仅在战乱中保住了他们的诗歌与传统技艺
更使这些传统中迎来了繁荣的发展
剑歌者们坚信,剑是最好的武器,优于一切任何形式的武器,并身体力行的贯彻落实这种思想,一心一意的只使用剑。
而任何其他的东西,只会在他们追求卓越的路上使他们对自己追寻的道路感到困惑

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-13 22:12:00 +0800 CST  
对应〈原文〉2
In ancient times, the Yokudan people were once artisans, poets, mystics, and scholars, but the constant civil wars that plagued the nation resulted in many searching for enlightenment through the Way of the Sword, also known as the "Song of the Blade". This eventually developed into a martial tradition known as sword-singing. Through the forging of beautiful swords tempered with magic, their artistry and poetry not only survived but flourished.[1][3] Sword-singers believed that the sword was superior to other types of weaponry, and were to devoted to using it exclusively. Anything else would only lead to confusion in their path to seek mastery.[4]

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-13 22:12:00 +0800 CST  
【背景资料2】
剑歌者为战神建造了许多神庙,也为自己建造了许多称为“战争美德之厅”的训练场。
在训练场里,剑歌者们训练战斗技巧和学习锻造剑的艺术。
他们崇拜许多战神 比如教授早期Yokudan人民如何将他们手中的小刀变换成剑的神onis。
【译者注-其实就是教授了他们更高级的锻造吧,这里有点类似鸟枪换炮的意思】
在剑歌者发展过程中
Diagna,古yokudan护佑之神的一个化身。
他教给了他们如何锻造兽人武器。
【译者注-这里的原文是orichalc weapon,一种矿石打造的武器,常用于兽人武器和护甲,故翻译为兽人武器】
而Leki,灵剑之圣。
则教会了他们一种在战斗中的瞬间使用假动作的功夫。

早期的剑歌者是从血统高贵的贵族家族里吸收成员的,而这些成员将于满11岁后加入剑歌者。
剑歌者的男性成员被称为“剑刃兄弟”
而女性成员被称为“圣剑少女”。
在数个世纪的不断探索和完善下,剑歌者们掌握了剑之道------它需要剑歌者们重走Frandar Hunding人生道路。
这条道路需要剑歌者以美德之名在野外击杀强大的怪物,在沿途救死扶伤。
想要走完这条路需要许多年,而不少剑歌者在这漫长的试炼里丢掉了性命。

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-13 23:15:00 +0800 CST  
〈对应原文3〉
The sword-singers built temples to the gods of war and training halls named the "Hall of the Virtues of War" in which they could practice their combat skills and the art of forging powerful swords.[1] They venerated warrior-gods such as Onsi, who showed early Yokudans how to pull their knives into swords,[4] Diagna, an avatar of the HoonDing who brought them orichalc weapons and Leki, the goddess of aberrant swordsmanship who introduced the singers to the "Ephemeral Feint" maneuver.[5] The sword-singers initially recruited from among the offspring of noble families.[1] New members were accepted into the order at age eleven. Males became known as "Brothers of the Blade" while females earned the title "Maidens of the Spirit Sword".[3] In later centuries, mastery of the Way was achieved upon completing the Walkabout—a wilderness trek emulating the life of Frandar Hunding, where singers would wander the countryside defeating monsters and aiding the citizenry in the name of virtue. The Walkabout could take years to complete and some singers didn't survive the trials.[6]

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-13 23:16:00 +0800 CST  
【背景资料〈3〉】
因为剑歌者们有有着严于律己,如同在沙漠中苦行的生活方式,所以他们从未拥有过众多成员。
尽管如此,剑歌者在Yokudan人中还是拥有极大的影响力。
在好几代的剑歌者之后,追寻剑之道成为了他们生命的唯一目标,而剑之道也深深的扎根在了Yokudan文化中。
而对于剑歌者,剑是他们灵魂的延展,是身体的一部分,他们简称,人与剑应当是一个整体,成为“剑客”。而不是人分人,剑分剑。

在各式各样的传说中,一名剑歌大师仅需要一把训练的简单木剑就可以击败敌人。

就这样,剑之道就潜移默化的融入到Yokudan人的生活,也融入了正在战斗着勇士的一招一式中。

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 00:17:00 +0800 CST  
〈对应原文4〉
Although the sword-singers were never a numerous people due to harsh and unforgiving desert lifestyle, they had a significant influence on Yokuda. Within a few generations, the Way of the Sword had become their life and was ingrained into Yokudan culture.[1][6]For the singers, the sword was seen as an extension of their soul and a symbol of honor.[3]They maintained that it was the swordsman, not the sword, that mattered.[7]Various legends and tales speak of masters requiring only a simple wooden training sword to defeat their adversaries.[8][9]Such was the influence of the Way of the Sword to Yokudan life, that everyday items bore depictions of swords or warriors assuming fighting stances.[10][11][12]

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 00:18:00 +0800 CST  
今天先翻译到这,明天估计就能翻译到喜闻乐见的核弹剑法了

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 00:36:00 +0800 CST  
【安赛〈1〉】
剑歌者中最优秀的被称作“剑圣”
用yokudan语来说,叫Ansei【斗胆在后文翻译成安赛】
安赛可以在身体里凝聚自己纯粹的精魂力量具象化一把仅属于自己灵魂的灵魂之剑,这种凝聚灵魂的力量被称作“Shehai”也就是“灵魂之剑”
一个安赛武士可以在自己的手中凝成这以纯洁思想为材料,用纯粹意志锻造的虚幻之剑。这种技能叫做“Shehai shen she Ru” ,灵剑之道 。
所有的剑歌者都会用不断的训练和冥想来学习如何在自己的身体里形成这种灵魂力量。
然而,并不是所有的剑歌者最终都能成为一名安赛。
【译者注:shehai应当是类似诺德的吐姆一样的力量,可以通过使用者的意愿来以各种各样的方式使用,正如吐姆不能被所有人掌握一样,shehai也是如此】
再成为一名安赛后,剑歌者的力量就超越了凡人,而安赛的有三个突出特点。首先 安赛对战神有着近乎着魔的崇拜,随时准备为之献身。
其次,安赛们有极度虔诚的心灵,且有远超任何人的专注力与强大武术技巧。
但与许多人以艰苦卓绝的磨练踏上灵剑之道所相反的,有些极有天赋的人在幼年时就展现了在体内形成“Shehai”的本事,而这些人往往只受过一点点训练,或干脆什么训练也没受过。【译者注:类似灰胡子和抓根宝的区别】
而有些人形成“shehai”的方式更为有趣,在收到强大的威胁时,潜能被激发,就这样阴差阳错的形成了Shehai。

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 19:40:00 +0800 CST  
我觉得我需要补充说明一下,这里的“shehai”的意义有点类似玄幻小说中所谓的灵海的意思,是安赛在体内以灵魂力量凝聚的....原文中用的是“Form”也就是形成“shehai”

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 19:42:00 +0800 CST  
【对应原文Ansei〈1〉】
The greatest among the sword-singers were known as "Saints of the Sword", or Ansei in Yoku. Ansei had the ability to manifest a sword from their very soul, known as a Shehai or "Spirit Sword".[1] By sheer force of will, an Ansei warrior could create this ethereal sword of pure thought and it would take shape in their hand.[13] This form of the Way became known as "Shehai Shen She Ru" or Way of the Spirit Sword.[14] All sword-singers trained to learn this form through intense training and meditation in the Way of the Sword, but not every swordsman was successful in becoming an Ansei.[1][6] Those who could were said to be more than mortal. They possessed intense devotion to the gods of war, immense piety, and a focus and skill far beyond what others could ever achieve.[15][3] Conversely, there have been certain gifted individuals who could form a Shehai from a very young age or with little or no training.[6] Other times, a Shehai may be formed in times of great stress.[14][6]

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 19:43:00 +0800 CST  
自顶一发 ,10.30会更新一到两篇

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 21:14:00 +0800 CST  
【安赛〈2〉】
想要成为一个安赛的首要条件是自己有能力成功的凝聚出“shehai”【按照吧友提议,我在后文将其表为圣海】
圣海常被描述为一种似乎由光组成,且像雾一样无实体而苍白的能量。
在刚刚凝聚出自己的圣海的时候圣海能量的形状甚至并不是剑状的,〈而剑歌者〉也不会把它当成真正的武器去使用它。【译者注:这里的翻译在下并不特别确定,我个人认为原作的意思是年轻安赛还无法完全掌握圣海能量,无法将其塑形】
而如果一个安赛希望成为一个精英,在举行他们的入会仪式前,会被要求放弃他们所有的珍爱的武器和战利品。
因为他们要是成功的通过仪式的话,他们也将不再需要任何传统意义上的武器了。
在通过仪式之后,想要成为一个真正的安赛的第二个条件是可以熟练的使用圣海能量化为的灵剑在战场上战斗。这些强大安赛的灵剑闪烁的更亮,也更致命。有传说将他们使用能量时击溃敌人之势就像镰刀割下小麦一样。
想要打败这样一个安赛,只有两种方法。砍下他的头,或者控制他的思想。
这些强大的安赛往往会开设自己的训练场,传授他们特殊的剑之道。
然而有一些证据表明,安赛的圣海可以被击碎,击碎后能量会消散,正如血肉被剥离骨架一般,最后只会剩下圣海的精髓。

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 23:00:00 +0800 CST  
〈安赛2对应原文〉
To become an Ansei of the first-rank, a sword-singer had to demonstrate an ability to form the Shehai.[6] These Shehai were described as typically pale, misty, insubstantial, and as if it was made of light. Sometimes its shape wouldn't even be particularly sword-like, and would be of no use as an actual weapon.[1][16][6] Ansei wishing to earn the elite title of first-rank were required to give up their most treasured weapons and war materiel before undertaking a grueling initiation ritual. If they succeeded, they would no longer need conventional weapons.[13]

Ansei of the second-rank and above were known to have the ability to not only form the Shehai, but wield it as a weapon in battle.[6] Their Shehai shined brighter and was much deadlier. Described as an "unstoppable weapon of great might" that could cut down foes like "a scythe through wheat", disarming such an Ansei could only be done by severing their head or taking their mind. These swordsmen often began their own training schools, teaching their individual way of the sword.[3][1][6] There was some evidence, however, that suggested the Shehai of an Ansei could be shattered, leaving behind only its essence.[17]

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 23:00:00 +0800 CST  
【安赛〈3〉】
作为安赛至高的美德就是在乡间漫游,于战斗中找乐子,在路上替人纠正错误,在遇见争吵时寻求结束争吵的方式,以此践行自己的剑之道。对于这些安赛来说,使用圣海能量就像呼吸一样自然。
在第二纪元的中期,勇士星座曾短暂下凡,他曾拥有着强大无比的灵魂之剑,强大到可以掀起海啸,或者引起一场魔法风暴

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 23:33:00 +0800 CST  
【安赛3对应原文】
Ansei of the highest virtue wandered the countryside engaging in battle, righting wrongs, and seeking to end the strife.[1]To them, manifesting the Shehai was said to have come as naturally as breathing.[18]Whenthe Warriorconstellation temporarily took amortal formin the mid-Second Era, he wielded an extremely powerful Shehai that was capable of producing shockwaves and magical storms.[19][20]

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 23:34:00 +0800 CST  
明日更新剑歌者在历史上的角色〈参与的大事件〉

楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 23:36:00 +0800 CST  
补两张词条上的图
图1是剑歌者常规武器
图2是一个神灵战士正在使用他的灵魂之剑释放一个强大的法术



楼主 ODLOC老司机  发布于 2018-07-14 23:46:00 +0800 CST  

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